Your Quick Shift In Mood Smells Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Your Quick Shift In Mood Smells



Yeah. Yeah,
I'd like to be there where you are.
Yeah. yeah,
But there is something about your demeanor.
I would like to see you as a shining star.
But your complaints keep you falling too quick.
When you open your mouth...
There is an expectation,
That comes with it!

Yeah. Yeah,
I'd like to be there to cheer you on.
Yeah. Yeah,
But from sunset till dawn that magic has gone.
Yeah. Yeah,
Your presentation needs a tweaking.
You have the image...
But your attitude reeks!
And this you believe keeps you unique.
All you need is a streak in your hair,
To skunk.
You don't have to stink to chase me away!
Your quick shift in mood smells.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 03 October 2009

Discovery is better then digging to shine as Star!

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Carol Gall 02 October 2009

lol i like this very much...

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Milica Franchi De Luri 02 October 2009

nicely put together...........

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