Traces of your teeth
stain white skin,
your mouth
sweet as summer's fruit
on a winters day.
Warm, clean blood
pulses to your lips
tearing gently,
filling slowly
this life into you.
Sustain me - I plead -
I want your eyes
encased in my soul
so desolute
with hardened desire.
Love consumes us all...
a child alone,
a candy store
to a hungry heart.
8/2/08
*my favourite vampire.
This is amazing..what an imagery explosion...fantastic visuals, texture.............. Remarkable poetess,10/10 Best wishes Jon.
'a candy store to a hungry heart' that's my absolute favorite line. i might just borrow that idea for a poem sometime. inspired, taylor
hardened desire... um... very cool... I really like that thought. Becca
This poem is beautiful there is no doubt about it I really like it indeed
'filling slowly this life into you' a...play of words (you can choose to fill in the dotted line with any of these words perfect, brilliant, genius etc...i found it too hard to pick one)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
One of the most creative writing ventures I've seen. GW62