I Miss You Poem by lady grace

I Miss You

Rating: 4.7


keep me under your wings
so i could be closer to your heart
let your lips close to mine
so you could smell the fragrance of my scent...

let me love you always
and be my love forever
keep me under your wings
and let me close to your heart...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol-Anne Spalding 07 July 2009

Compact yet communicates so much...excellent!

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 July 2009

this is so beautiful

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 10 July 2009

so heartwarming, beautiful.......thanks for sharing 10

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Afzal Shauq 10 July 2009

keep me under your wings so i could be closer to your heart let your lips close to mine so you could smell the fragrance of my scent... let me love you always and be my love forever keep me under your wings and let me close to your heart... what a sweet missing way..in poetry form..it seems like you are talking from the core of your sweet heart..see feeling it..1010

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Aziz Alkaabi 10 July 2009

Brief, yet heavey laden with real emotions of a yearning heart. Beautifully crafted.

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keep me under your wings so i could be closer to your heart let your lips close to mine so you co.............. desire any way to remain so closer..beautiful imagination with strong urge....10 read mine miss i miss u and anywhere...

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 July 2009

lovely... so beautiful to think and feel... graciously written... fine-flowing.....I love thins... very passionate... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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rago rago 20 July 2009

powerful to read.......and beautiful to comment...... lady grace is always gracious in writing...

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sweet and very inviting..

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Alf Hutchison 19 July 2009

Two words... brief and beautiful... thanks for the invite regards Alf 10

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