God saw me in pain
to cure me
He gave me a gift,
RAIN....
it washed out all my sorrow...
gave me pleasure....
And it make me insane....
RAIN....
Wash my hatred away..
Soak mein your arms again...
Promise to never let me go...
Hide my tears..
and
Kiss away all my pain.....
The pain that causes my life
to fall to grow....
COME..
Wash the tears
that strained my eyes....
Wash all my scars away...
Wash all my memories away..
Stop the pain that enters me
Make me want to live my life...
Keep me going completely insane....
So, COME..
Let me feel the Rain...
Let me dance in the Rain...
In Rain I will not feel the Pain...! !
in the peom 'RAIN' is used more as a symbol than the real rain..could be a benediction, could be a divine intervention, could be a panacia for all injuries that oozes blood and tears. nice poem..every soul in worries and stress and strain need such rains..let the almighty shower on the poet and on all mortals...
It is a very beautiful poem on rain. I like rain as well because when it rains it removes many people's pain and give them relief. Keep Writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
rain and pain good combo, cheer up life is full of ups and downs, no one is happy regards vm
Shalini said it right i guess... :) just kidding. I really liked it..I love getting drenched in the rain because of such special qualities of it.
if rain always stays as u have said in the middle, it will cause more pain in form of floods... rain in moderate level is good..
A LOVELY POEM ON RAIN...A GIFT OF GOD..TAKING AWAY ALL YOUR PAIN...READ MY POEM 'A FINGERS TOUCH ON ME'
I will bottle the ocean and make it quench your thirst He gave me a gift, RAIN.... it washed out all my sorrow... we gain the rain...
master piece and I think this is the bet in your poetry.. loved it..and the way you did in heartfelt stanzas is sweet and soul touching..really a sweet and menaingful poem..10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
interesting poem, Just watch out for the tyops and tense.... I like the simple concept of kissing the rain and seeing sorrows washed away..........