What A Wonderful World..! Poem by Bilal Raja

I, too, wonder if this world is wonderful. And if we can laugh when we suppose to cry, talk when we suppose to listen, there is no doubt where we're going to lead the world's fate. Nice Piece

exactly how could we love when every ones hating? how could we heal when everyones hurtin?

Last line answers many problems in life. People like lies that seem good at the time. BUT, the truth will set you free.

Hi Bilal, I liked the repetition of 'how can we live' for it drives the message home the first, second, a third time and over... So true and it's the basic nature of all humans to lie, ignore, neglect, and not see... Thanks Deva

A clever use of repetition and another anguished cry from your heart, along with the sardonic title!

when theY'RE trying.....nice poem though

people are dying, yes, we need a change in our thoughts the poem is heart felt. keep it up get 10

I agree with Sumaira too.. we can change the world. And we will. we are leaving the worst now, but this will make us grow up, this will make us realize of what we have to do. nice poem

I agree with Sumaira...youth can change the world...nice thought 10

Bilal youth hav power 2 change th world.. Ths world need CHANGE... 'If v cn thn v will' so dn't say how...yer one smile is enough 4 it friend +8 4 u artistic write.