Ashraful Musaddeq

Rookie - 40 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

[03] Affluent Love - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Desire came and hugged
Dream called and kissed
Appetite detained me and
Kicked— on the rend life

Naughty mosquito's teeth
On my sleepy imagination
Space is my latent existence
Affluent love— the silent killer

Poem 01
Book 'Affluent Love- The Silent Killer' February 2012
Copyright Writer
Adarsha Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 978-984-8875-33-9

Comments about [03] Affluent Love by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • Bronze Star - 2,723 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/9/2009 1:02:00 PM)

    'Space is my latent existence
    Affluent love— silent killer'

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  • Rookie Surayya Abbas (8/3/2009 1:42:00 PM)

    A Nice style.Nice to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (6/20/2009 3:08:00 PM)

    'Affluent love— silent killer '

    ohhhh...yes always come up with something special! ! ! ! ! 10+++
    enjoyed this one very one...some people say my ones are bit too long...well i m not good at writing, , short, sweet awesome poems at all..hats off! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Kafil Uddin Raihan (6/20/2009 9:55:00 AM)

    Space in my latent existence.affluent love silent killer...awesom sir. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,100 Points Antonio Liao (6/20/2009 2:19:00 AM)

    just wondeful and awesome poem...its only in
    you....God bless.....a 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (6/18/2009 8:26:00 PM)

    love with the creatures....... let the affluent love flow from depth..... see my 10 ++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 41 Points Malini Kadir (6/17/2009 2:31:00 PM)

    genuine, raw......realistic (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mamta Agarwal (6/17/2009 10:24:00 AM)

    very innovative presentation..i read it several times, liked it a lot still feel missed something.

    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rinzu Susan Rajan (6/16/2009 2:29:00 AM)

    thats so different...a unique and innovative style of expression...

    : -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pandian Angelina (6/13/2009 2:05:00 PM)

    Poet come, please teach me
    What you sing, I sit below
    'Neath the shade of the Banyan tree
    Poet come, please I wait for thee!
    I say, Wha! Wha! ! with wide open eyes
    Angel (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,942 Points john tiong chunghoo (6/11/2009 10:39:00 AM)

    this is lovely ashraf. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Vidi Writes (6/11/2009 9:29:00 AM)

    Affluent Love, rush of blood
    Not knowing what not to do.
    What not happens...
    Still a feel of nothing....
    Yes its truly... a silent killer.
    But who wouldn't prefer this giant killer? !

    Good one. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rosalinda Martinez (6/11/2009 12:16:00 AM)

    i like this poem very much. thanks for your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rosalinda Martinez (6/11/2009 12:15:00 AM)

    i like this very poem! thanks for your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,164 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (6/10/2009 2:10:00 PM)

    beauty parades by affluence
    wonder seems to redound by love...excellent write, yet of unique genre,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie T McH (6/10/2009 4:38:00 AM)

    Excellent and accurate juxtaposition in that last line. t x (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 47,517 Points Edward Kofi Louis (6/10/2009 3:12:00 AM)

    Great work! Yes, love is a silent killer; and, we have to be very careful along the paths of love. Thank you.

    Edward Kofi Louis. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Raj Arumugam (6/10/2009 2:58:00 AM)

    another original and wonderful poem in this haiku-Ashraful style (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Oneline Poet (6/9/2009 5:37:00 PM)

    Wonderful Poem! ! ! ! Love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ch J Satyananda Kumar (6/9/2009 6:13:00 AM)

    Wonderful write with a nice rhyming. Kudos friend. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 5, 2012

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