Melvina Germain

Silver Star - 3,517 Points (Sydney, Nova Scotia)

(220) A Film To Sea - Poem by Melvina Germain

Far away in the distance,
a shadow cast upon the sea.
Upon arriving closer,
that shadow bled a travesty.
Hundreds of fish lay still,
a film upon the water.
A sad displeasing sight to view,
sad for me, sad for you.
Toxic waste bares its ugly face.
Progress has a dirty hand.
The ecosystem is in danger.
Our Sea, Our Land.

Comments about (220) A Film To Sea by Melvina Germain

  • Rookie David Darbyshire (6/15/2007 3:46:00 PM)

    I love the water and all its creatures Melvina good write well said dave xxx (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Brian Dorn (6/15/2007 9:43:00 AM)

    I like your play on words in both the title and contents, it adds an interesting contrast to the serious nature of the poem. Very clever... among your very best work!
    Brian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (6/14/2007 8:54:00 PM)

    Your concern for all things living is beautifully and eloquently expressed. One can only hope that the world is listening. I admire you for speaking out. Fine work, Melvina.

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asma Bahrainwala (6/13/2007 8:43:00 AM)

    excellent, Melvina... this one's pretty straightforward and hardhitting...

    Asma... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dipy Hermonite (6/12/2007 2:55:00 PM)

    Oh wake up all yee careless lots
    Coz thou shall not be spared
    For all thy deeds that thou could have stopped
    By Melvina shall now be bared! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Meggie Gultiano (6/11/2007 8:15:00 PM)

    Marvelous Melvina! We should write poems like this as a wake up call to those who doesn't care about our environment. It bleeds my heart, too.. Kudos! thanks for this! Love you! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,223 Points David Harris (6/10/2007 1:31:00 PM)

    Melvina, your last line the sea and land is so true. People forget for their greed the beauties that they steal from us with their toxic waste. Top Marks from me thanks for sharing it my friend.
    David (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Risha : Ahmed (6/10/2007 9:10:00 AM)

    Another gem from gem of a person. A great write. I think you should be a cheerleader for 'greenpeace'.
    Love you....................................................Risha (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Theresa Moore (6/10/2007 7:02:00 AM)

    A chilling warning... strong and powerful poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (6/9/2007 9:09:00 PM)

    This is a powerful piece about pollution and man's stupidity and inhumanity to all life. The strength of this poem is in the directness of the telling. Thanks for sharing. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 49,999 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/9/2007 5:17:00 PM)

    Magnificent enviormental statement...sadly true...Fine penning, young never disappoint!

    FjR (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 9, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 9, 2011

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