Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Rookie - 1 Points (November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

Tape And Glue - Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

''My heart is very fragile, held together
By a bit of tape and glue.
It can't handle being shattered again;
Keep it safe and hold it close,
So that it might heal.''
Unable to deal with another blow,
I gave you the opportunity to
Revive or repress my happiness.
Would you dropp my weakened heart
All in due time?
I couldn't predict the outcome.
You worked your way into it.
The tape and glue fell away
As you took their place in
Piecing it together and repairing my wounds
With your tender love that fills
The once gaping, hollow spaces where
Missing components were never regained
And the cracks that were forged
Through the most powerful of pressures.
The last remedy that has a possibility
Of succeeding is your time, your love,
And your life.
For now my heart is strong,
With your essence infused within it,
But if you were to attempt to
Abandon it, when you provide its
Only structure, the slivers that remain
Would hardly be salvageable
And forced to be scrapped.
You've made a permanent mark
On this once battered, worn,
Torn and tattered heart, and
It can no longer survive without you.


Comments about Tape And Glue by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

  • Veteran Poet - 1,290 Points Tony Karas (6/11/2014 12:36:00 PM)

    Truly a most beautiful write..... tape and glue.... yes, I know that welll. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 27,496 Points Akhtar Jawad (5/11/2014 8:43:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 900 Points Leslie Philibert (5/11/2014 5:19:00 AM)

    Not bad, the theme is well worked at, the idea itself not new, and perhaps the central metaphor tires towards the
    end, but a poem that will be liked (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,626 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/11/2013 5:29:00 AM)

    very fine, very fine, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,675 Points Savita Tyagi (8/17/2012 10:21:00 PM)

    ''My heart is very fragile, held together
    By a bit of tape and glue. Love your title and wordings. Very well composed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marcella D (7/12/2012 10:41:00 AM)

    Now this one had a emo-love genre/theme that makes sense. keep it up with other genre/theme's such as horror or comedy or any of them :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,292 Points Kevin Patrick (6/29/2012 8:48:00 PM)

    I read this after reading Wind and the Winds and I think this is a thousand times better; you threw away the baggage of trying to sound like somebody else, and seem to have a voice that is more acclimated to yourself and makes you unique.

    The tape and glue fell away
    As you took their place in
    Piecing it together and repairing my wounds
    With your tender love that fills
    The once gaping, hollow spaces where
    Missing components were never regained
    And the cracks that were forged

    See this is what’s great, fantastic use of similes and alliterations which don’t sound hackneyed from other works, this is all you and that is why I think it is really great. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Besa Dede (6/22/2012 9:15:00 AM)

    I like the way you use free rhyme to tell a story to the reader. Interesting piece
    Regards,
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 740 Points Kaila George (6/21/2012 11:42:00 PM)

    Im not sure what to think, I had to read it a few times to understand, normally when I do read it just jumps at me, how people write I mean, this is good, it expresses how you feel with every line, just needs to flow together, but I still think you are a brillant poet for one so young I mean the first one I read just blew me away. Actually made my mouth dropp with a gaping look of wonder...smiles...anyway keep up the writes my friend...hope we are if you want you can leave comments on mine as well would love to see what you think. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 60 Points Kebe Iwara (6/21/2012 12:22:00 PM)

    I admire ur tact and craft.this only simply conveys a strong emotion of love and not to impress. Though not ur best poem, bt it conveys d emotion well enough. I'd like u 2 rd some of mine too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Amber Glistener (6/21/2012 10:56:00 AM)

    :) This is a very well thought out piece of work. I enjoyed reading it and I hope that you continue to write for your whole life because you have a true talent here and no matter what anybody says, it is good. I'm sure you make God smile. The emotions in this piece are clear, which is a wonderful thing. It is very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (6/21/2012 7:53:00 AM)

    I really enjoyed it because I really like love poems, and it feels good to read feelings I can remember having for someone, though a long time ago. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tammie Aimson (6/21/2012 7:24:00 AM)

    i think this is geart and you should keep it up, it s a beautiful poem. x tamara (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joyce Rugg (6/20/2012 5:51:00 PM)

    This is beautiful! I love it. I'd say there's no way to improve this one, because it's perfect as is. Care to check out mine? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Indira Babbellapati (6/20/2012 12:15:00 PM)

    interesting........... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lenore Lee (6/19/2012 11:48:00 PM)

    Beautiful simplicity. I like the story behind it; one person can come into your life and just make everything better. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Juan Guzman (6/19/2012 7:57:00 PM)

    to put it simple the poem feels as if you started off writing about something and then drifted into writing about something else and ruins the mood, but i guess it was an okay poem. sorry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Matty Reynolds (6/19/2012 12:17:00 PM)

    I'm curious about the punctuation in this poem. It reads like a long drawn out sentence and left be needing air. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Connor Whyte (6/18/2012 5:29:00 PM)

    When our walls break down and crumble away reseal them and make them stronger it is the only thing that keeps our judgment right instead of wrong. Very well written and people can always relate to these feelings. Keep up the good work good job. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,433 Points Hans Vr (6/17/2012 7:13:00 PM)

    NIce expression of an 'in' love poem.
    Let the glue and tape be the wonderful sunrises and sunsets, the soul power you possess and nobody will be able to break that heart again. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 22, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 19, 2012


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