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Noel Horlanda
(11/19/2009 1:28:00 AM) |
ocean’s floor never dries
always wet by our untiring love
excited lips and hungry moves
disturb the silence of the night... I love this fourth stanza, the lines are deeply etched in my mind and my heart. some sort of eroticsm, you think so? Take care...10+
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Aijaz Asif
(11/15/2009 11:00:00 AM) |
very beautiful and smooth write ma'am and you are genius in making feelings into words....i loved it, many many 10+++++
rgds
asif
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Hasmukh Amathalal
(11/8/2009 7:11:00 PM) |
like the way you understand
the way you comprehend
the way you take in
no matter what…you’re all I ever need...
relation is like trees which grow when we provide nourishment in the form of appreciation..love, , care and understanding and this is very basic essence of it. there is no room for any misuderstanding and one must bealways tolerent this is how it develops in big tree...well cone and good piece of an art....10
read mine...not easy.... i miss
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Akram Awadat
(11/8/2009 3:08:00 AM) |
fantastic poem lady grace, well done
10
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Sandra Martyres
(11/8/2009 1:18:00 AM) |
Lovely romantic piece with perfect imagery....10
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Sanober Khan
(11/8/2009 12:27:00 AM) |
so beautiful and sweet, i loved it! !
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