lady grace


A Chance - Poem by lady grace

quiet and wondering
here I am with broken wing
can’t move... can’t breathe
alone again....

you and I never give up
to troubles coming everyday
we always smile to crisis that comes
after all... GOD guides our way...

we’ll never leave an empty place
a chance to dominate our hearts
love is filled with honesty
sincerity seen at first sight...

ocean’s floor never dries
always wet by our untiring love
excited lips and hungry moves
disturb the silence of the night...

i like the way you understand
the way you comprehend
the way you take in
no matter what…you’re all I ever need...


Comments about A Chance by lady grace

  • Rookie Akram Awadat (7/19/2010 3:01:00 AM)

    deep meaning words
    i feel with it
    thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Nalathai Vongjalorn (11/25/2009 9:16:00 PM)

    Nice poem i loved it 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Noel Horlanda (11/19/2009 1:28:00 AM)

    ocean’s floor never dries
    always wet by our untiring love
    excited lips and hungry moves
    disturb the silence of the night... I love this fourth stanza, the lines are deeply etched in my mind and my heart. some sort of eroticsm, you think so? Take care...10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (11/15/2009 11:00:00 AM)

    very beautiful and smooth write ma'am and you are genius in making feelings into words....i loved it, many many 10+++++

    rgds
    asif (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (11/8/2009 10:29:00 PM)

    A very well written poem....
    Well executed...
    10s (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,812 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/8/2009 7:11:00 PM)

    like the way you understand
    the way you comprehend
    the way you take in
    no matter what…you’re all I ever need...

    relation is like trees which grow when we provide nourishment in the form of appreciation..love, , care and understanding and this is very basic essence of it. there is no room for any misuderstanding and one must bealways tolerent this is how it develops in big tree...well cone and good piece of an art....10

    read mine...not easy.... i miss (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Akram Awadat (11/8/2009 3:08:00 AM)

    fantastic poem lady grace, well done
    10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Martyres (11/8/2009 1:18:00 AM)

    Lovely romantic piece with perfect imagery....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sanober Khan (11/8/2009 12:27:00 AM)

    so beautiful and sweet, i loved it! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 26, 2009


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