Treasure Island

Fay Slimm

(Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

A Consummate Love

A rare fullness describes best
The love which releases utter
Fulfillment, - love which gives rest.
Searching for wholeness, we can trust
That fate will arrange, entire
And complete, a right love, by
Guiding our heart, and firing
Us fully for unqualified
Giving, achieving this truth
Will consummate total love,
Which when brimful, conclusive
Yet rounded, is easy to prove.

Submitted: Tuesday, May 05, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, May 20, 2009

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  • Shashendra Amalshan (5/19/2009 2:56:00 PM)

    so seems to flow thru yur veins...infact thru yur pen too...your pen seems to ooze out ink of love..soo very beautiful..10++ (Report) Reply

  • Shashendra Amalshan (5/11/2009 12:39:00 AM)

    Love is da most beautiful feeling ever...jesus's best weapon against devil..harry pottter's best weapon, superpower against evil...n wolverine's best weapon is his best super power...cause if devil toook over he cud v become a tiger, , , see u soon wirth love10+++ (Report) Reply

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