Fay Slimm

Rookie - 12 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

A Contented Love. - Poem by Fay Slimm

A gentle contentment invades my heart,
And begins a start toward peace.
Changes dull mood, lightens my mind, reaches
Down into my soul, parting
Me from previous darkness, and it spreads
Deep happiness, wraps smiles of bright
Colour around my day, holds me tightly
In it's spell as it readys me
For love, which I know will increase and flood
My cold blood, giving me ardour
From which until now I've been locked and barred.
Gentle contentment feels lovely.


Comments about A Contented Love. by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie Carl Harris (5/18/2009 6:31:00 PM)

    Ah, there is nothing like being in love with someone, Fay, and allowing that wondrous warm flood of emotion and passion to wash over you, bringing you that so desirable inner contentment of love. There isn't quite another feeling like it in the whole world. Your beautiful poem points this out very well! Carl. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 127 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (5/10/2009 5:14:00 PM)

    gentle contentment feels lovely.. i agree.. beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (5/7/2009 6:36:00 AM)

    Fay, Gentle grace takes an eye and hearts, it's lovely a poem..10...
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,697 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/7/2009 4:52:00 AM)

    From the Hudson Bay
    To the grand U.K.
    This is classic Fay
    In 'poetic' play
    On this 7th of May!

    ~ ~ ~
    2009 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (5/7/2009 4:06:00 AM)

    Great blessing for a contented love...............lovely and charming poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sue Sie (5/7/2009 4:01:00 AM)

    This is so tenderly written Fay...a contented heart is all we ask for...10++
    Sue (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (5/7/2009 3:40:00 AM)

    Wonderful soft write Fay...enjoyed reading this si much...Fi 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (5/7/2009 3:38:00 AM)

    Just beautiful Fay... Andy 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, May 18, 2009


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