Valsa George

A (Conventional) Love Song! Poem by Valsa George

Oh my Love! The throb and thrill of my life!
Why remain so elusive like will-o’- the- wisp?
Why vanish quickly like a delightful dream
Why fade out like a symphony sweet?

Won’t you come to me to ease my pain
To herald for me a new dawn
To transport me to worlds intangible
To be ever with me as my guardian angel

Hold my hand when I am about to fall
Help me set new goals when I am lost
Make me laugh when I am low
Infuse courage when I develop cold feet

Show me dew drops that I can see diamonds
Feed me with home fare that I may taste Ambrosia
Gift me a rose that a thousand blooms instantly burst open
Talk high of me that rainbows may arch around my sky

Take your glance off, I will wither like a flower
Show a cold shoulder, I am sure to grow frozen inside
Speak roughly, I would hear rumblings of thunder in my ear
Turn your back, Oh! My heart would break into shards

Like the setting sun nose diving into the depths,
Like two streams that flow and merge as one
And travel miles to run down to the sea,
Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever!

Submitted: Sunday, June 9, 2013
Edited: Monday, June 10, 2013

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  • Rookie - 427 Points Chris Zachariou (8/8/2014 6:36:00 AM)

    A touching poem about the feelings stirred by true love. Wonderfully written and expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,583 Points Amitava Sur (6/3/2014 10:36:00 PM)

    A amazing write up specially plunging into eternity with the immortal love.... I was just floating with your flow of words. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,906 Points Akhtar Jawad (5/30/2014 11:15:00 AM)

    Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever!
    Love is God and God is love, the poem is a sweet lovely song for him. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,212 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/11/2014 4:59:00 AM)

    Truly beautiful and nice poem to recite and also to understand the meanings a little difficult it felt.Ambrosia what I don't know. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,881 Points * Sunprincess * (4/28/2014 8:13:00 PM)

    .......oh this is truly beautiful and your words would definitely win anyone's heart....enjoyed this beautiful poem... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,862 Points Paul Sebastian (4/17/2014 4:16:00 AM)

    Song of love from a lover awaiting for her loved one to unite. Beautiful! ! ! Feelings well captured in words. Great romantic write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Yash Shinde (3/19/2014 12:09:00 AM)

    what a romantic song dear, would be a hit if it is fused with rhythm and music.......great.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,796 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (3/3/2014 10:23:00 AM)

    An eternal love song composed very delicately.........Valsa.......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/14/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Beautiful romantic poem.. Loved reading it twice. And the last stanza so beautifully completed... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,741 Points Heather Wilkins (6/26/2013 5:31:00 PM)

    Sing a beautiful love song. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,254 Points Sekharan Pookkat (6/18/2013 10:55:00 AM)

    Sing and sing the song of love
    And fill the hearts of all (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 534 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (6/15/2013 3:05:00 AM)

    Oh! What a lovely romantic love song! If only all pairs were like this oozing with love there wouldn't be any divorce in the world. Let us plunge into eternity to be in love ever and ever is a brilliant finishing line, Valsa! KUDOS! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 534 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (6/15/2013 2:46:00 AM)

    What a romantic poem, Valsa! Oh! what a thrill to read your wonderful poem oozing with love! If only every pair in the world is such there won't be any divorces as the pair plunges into eternity to be in love ever and ever!
    AN AWESOME WRITE! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,523 Points Diane Hine (6/14/2013 8:10:00 AM)

    A grand love poem, bursting with passion! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,528 Points Neela Nath (6/13/2013 11:29:00 PM)

    So romantic it is.Lovable. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,850 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/13/2013 1:37:00 PM)

    Let us plunge into eternity to be in love - nice poem expressing love's beautiful steps. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (6/12/2013 3:08:00 PM)

    Love begins at home, and it is not how much we do... but how much love we put in that action.
    Mother Teresa
    oh ma'am! i am in love with this piece...bravo indeed (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,194 Points Valerie Dohren (6/12/2013 1:47:00 PM)

    A beautiful song to love Valsa, so many lovely lines. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (6/11/2013 5:13:00 AM)

    its so romantically will never be can melt evey iciness heart and make lots of droplets which wet every dried heart.
    wonderful i love it~nb10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points David Wood (6/10/2013 5:47:00 AM)

    Love is a many splendid thing that is never still and true love is like a rare berautiful orchid. (Report) Reply

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