kanav justa

Freshman - 1,052 Points (Shimla)

A Dreaming Child


if veracity stings dreams are delight,
i meet those dreams in the dawning night

where memories old, , too old too old
in a coffer stored, never were sold

in dreams I fall, in dreams I rise
in dreams like child I scream and cry

i see those things what I left behind
back in time, where hearts were kind

like a gust of wind in dreams I am wild
in sleep I am still a dreaming child

where memories old, too old too old
we had a silken skin and a heart of gold

in the dead of the night when away lies sun
i am a noble man when my eyes are shun

but things they change when I awake
those mortal dreams, like glasses break

like breeze now I blow so calm and mild
i wonder where’s that dreaming child

Submitted: Saturday, March 08, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, March 11, 2014

Topic of this poem: dreams

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  • Gold Star - 10,094 Points * Sunprincess * (6/4/2014 12:32:00 PM)

    ........truly this write is one of sparkling brilliance....like the stars shining down on the dreaming child....who grows up to be a wonderful person, loved by everyone.......kanav, i truly LOVE this marvelous poem.....love the way you wrote it....the rhyming and flow is perfect....can't wait for you to write another like this one :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 625 Points V P Mahur (4/10/2014 1:28:00 PM)

    Dear Kanav,
    This is a sweet melodious poem. It is true that sometimes the dreams are very sweet. Nice one.
    Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 84 Points Yash Shinde (3/19/2014 11:19:00 AM)

    ......dreaming child within us is really lost...call it a result of time or sign of development, we've lost the capacity to dream........and so have lost our innocence.....great write Kanav (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,553 Points Dinesh Nair (3/15/2014 10:36:00 AM)

    Children must grow dreaming
    And the grown ups should follow suit..
    It is on the right track that you position your thoughts, Kanav. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Reader (3/15/2014 1:41:00 AM)

    That dreaming child is a timeless, ageless being, still resides in you...it's he who has composed this poem, it's he who dares to dream, it's he who is very talented guy! good work! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 185 Points Joseph Anderson (3/12/2014 2:07:00 PM)

    Today I am 89 and here I sit, reading a very beautiful poem and thinking of all the water that has gone over the dam. An excellant write from one so young, or for any age-10 in my book (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,622 Points Rajesh Thankappan (3/11/2014 11:03:00 AM)

    Dreams are a doorway which often opens straight into an unforeseen wonderland. A lovely poem Kanav, which makes me long for a beautiful dream. May this dream of mine at least come true! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Rubab Atwal (3/10/2014 9:24:00 AM)

    a truly beautiful poem...amazing lines yes there is a difference in the world of reality and the world of dreams (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,033 Points Valsa George (3/10/2014 2:32:00 AM)

    'but things they change when I awake
    those mortal dreams, like glasses break'

    Great lines! ! Yes, there is a world of difference between dreams and reality! Kanav.... this is indeed a very poetic and enchanting piece! I too award you a10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (3/9/2014 2:02:00 PM)

    dreams are the doors of new world full of hope and belief, wonderfully expressed feeling of a innocent child
    bravo sir (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,094 Points * Sunprincess * (3/8/2014 12:53:00 AM)

    .........kanav....I know you are a SWEETHEART when you are asleep....and you like to sleep this is why you are always in a good mood....i love this about you....and I wish I could write a poem like you.....you are an AMAZING poet....and you CAPTURE my IMAGINATION every time........how can you write like this? ....you are the best POET ever...I totally LOVE this MASTERPIECE! (Report) Reply

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