kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points (Shimla)

A Dreaming Child - Poem by kanav justa

if veracity stings dreams are delight,
i meet those dreams in the dawning night

where memories old, , too old too old
in a coffer stored, never were sold

in dreams I fall, in dreams I rise
in dreams like child I scream and cry

i see those things what I left behind
back in time, where hearts were kind

like a gust of wind in dreams I am wild
in sleep I am still a dreaming child

where memories old, too old too old
we had a silken skin and a heart of gold

in the dead of the night when away lies sun
i am a noble man when my eyes are shun

but things they change when I awake
those mortal dreams, like glasses break

like breeze now I blow so calm and mild
i wonder where’s that dreaming child

Topic(s) of this poem: dreams

Comments about A Dreaming Child by kanav justa

  • Gold Star - 37,059 Points * Sunprincess * (6/29/2014 9:44:00 AM)

    .........................~~~~~~~~~ love Love love ~~~~~~~~~......................... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Rishabh Bidya (4/12/2014 10:32:00 AM)

    Whoever that child is, he must be very fortunate indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 824 Points V P Mahur (4/10/2014 1:28:00 PM)

    Dear Kanav,
    This is a sweet melodious poem. It is true that sometimes the dreams are very sweet. Nice one.
    Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,059 Points * Sunprincess * (3/31/2014 10:00:00 PM)

    ........kanav, this poem I LOVE :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (3/19/2014 11:19:00 AM)

    ......dreaming child within us is really lost...call it a result of time or sign of development, we've lost the capacity to dream........and so have lost our innocence.....great write Kanav (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points Shahzia Batool (3/16/2014 7:17:00 AM)

    I wonder too Kanav on the same lines...near perfect couplet-composition, so meaningful! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (3/15/2014 10:36:00 AM)

    Children must grow dreaming
    And the grown ups should follow suit..
    It is on the right track that you position your thoughts, Kanav. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Reader (3/15/2014 1:41:00 AM)

    That dreaming child is a timeless, ageless being, still resides in you...it's he who has composed this poem, it's he who dares to dream, it's he who is very talented guy! good work! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Sadvansha Munshi (3/14/2014 10:10:00 AM)

    lovely poem! loved reading it.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 526 Points Joseph Anderson (3/12/2014 2:07:00 PM)

    Today I am 89 and here I sit, reading a very beautiful poem and thinking of all the water that has gone over the dam. An excellant write from one so young, or for any age-10 in my book (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,971 Points Rajesh Thankappan (3/11/2014 11:03:00 AM)

    Dreams are a doorway which often opens straight into an unforeseen wonderland. A lovely poem Kanav, which makes me long for a beautiful dream. May this dream of mine at least come true! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Rubab Atwal (3/10/2014 9:24:00 AM)

    a truly beautiful poem...amazing lines yes there is a difference in the world of reality and the world of dreams (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,825 Points Anthony Di''anno (3/10/2014 6:38:00 AM)

    A lovely poen Kanav. A wake up call to the child that sleeps in all of us. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,799 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (3/10/2014 5:39:00 AM)

    A very dreamy and fascinating poem very delicately crafted..........I loved it....a must 10.....Kanav (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,961 Points Valsa George (3/10/2014 2:32:00 AM)

    'but things they change when I awake
    those mortal dreams, like glasses break'

    Great lines! ! Yes, there is a world of difference between dreams and reality! Kanav.... this is indeed a very poetic and enchanting piece! I too award you a10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (3/9/2014 2:02:00 PM)

    dreams are the doors of new world full of hope and belief, wonderfully expressed feeling of a innocent child
    bravo sir (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,731 Points Valerie Dohren (3/8/2014 2:20:00 PM)

    The drems of a child are innocent and sweet. Lovely poem Kanav. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 8, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 11, 2014

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