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A Second Saviour

Life gets annihilated, history rewrites,
War grasps nature with its caliginous veil
Human race cries in intense pain,
Green goes dry as icebergs melt,
And death triumphs in torrential rain,
While submerged humanity rummages
Seeking for a hopeful verse!
Erupting volcanoes, devastating quakes
Turns around those blissful days
As we mourn with each heavy blow
And dig our own destiny in a deep hollow,
Stars don't shine in this bloody universe
We wait for a new saviour, a second Jesus.

Copyright © 2013 Indranil Bhaduri

Submitted: Friday, August 16, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 16, 2013


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  • Yash Shinde (4/5/2014 10:49:00 AM)

    .............a fantastic and beautiful pieces sir...........an intense touching write........

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  • Patricia Grantham (11/25/2013 3:04:00 PM)

    A very intense and touching poem. Life can come and go, this is the
    way of the world. Our Creator will make everything alright one day.
    Well written.

  • Pijush Biswas (11/24/2013 10:57:00 PM)

    yes, ...there may be an earthquake in our country....so a second saviour is indeed needed....thanks

  • Donald Kuutsi (10/17/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    yah you have the vibe keep its up! ! What an inspiring Poem..life its just a constant process of dying and life is too short... Good poem! ! !

  • Rituparna Sen (9/7/2013 10:27:00 AM)

    Mankind is responsible for the slow destruction of earth. But at the same time, hopes build in the name of a second saviour. Fantastic piece of work.

  • Ramesh Rai (9/7/2013 8:26:00 AM)

    certainly you believe in NETI NETI n n the voice of Krishna yada yada...... a mighty power appears to save the creation for imstance avtaar of vishnu but it is always changing as per circumstances n need. its happen so SAMBHWAMI YUGE YUGE but what should b form n complex is a complex matter. indeed he will b a saviour to save the creation. so good thoughts n skilled write

  • Dinesh Nair (9/5/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    Saving from what and how long is the perennial question. We have been building castles in the perishable earth and once we return to our very past of restrained life, perhaps a solace may be found. I appreciate your observations on the ailing life and this poem has commendably been well rendered.

  • Neela Nath (9/5/2013 7:13:00 AM)

    The Second Coming we need.A fabulous poem Indranil.

  • Mohabeer Beeharry (9/3/2013 1:46:00 PM)

    Indranil, let me say I like this poem.sorry for the despair.
    But look at the situation in a less emotive way.
    We are all apt to blame God for what is happening.
    And we forget him when everything goes right.
    Now we want him to come and send someone to clean the floor for us.

    Think of the but hearing of the red Indians, the gassing of Jew and the actual killing of each other in Syria, Egypt and rapes and murders, God did not do any of these.
    There are more things happening in the ether, that you and me can think of.
    And those natural disasters are direct results of the cries and the fears of thousands butchered, and the spirits finding no war to go where they should.
    I do not believe God should another one to be butchered on the cross again.
    We should start doing the cleaning. Prayer may be one of the way to clean.

    I m sorry. Please excuse me if I hurt your feeling. Not meant to

    Mohabeer Beeharry

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/25/2013 6:30:00 AM)

    In a world devastated with calamities, we keep looking for a new hope. Neatly expressed. Thank you.

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