Indranil Bhaduri

Rookie - 196 Points (Kolkata, India)

Crumpled Piece Of Paper - Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

I was all alone
With the pale candle light burning by my side.
Disturbed thoughts and isolated mind
Eating up my soul.
The broken heart sobbed in distress,
And gradually, the solitude engulfed me..
I franctically searched for my lost feelings
And my lustful wishes got devastated
For my missing love,
With me lamenting in melancholy.
The half empty glass fell down
Freeing itself out of my trembling hands,
And broke into numerous pieces,
With scattered capsules all over the floor
Till you came in as the beautiful angel
And put your tender lips on mine..
Bringing the sparkles of distant stars all around
With your divine kiss,
Opening the doors of paradise
For my lonely soul to step in..
Thus leaving the crumpled piece of paper
Lying on the table
Penned with my last wishes saying
'Goodbye World'..! !

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri


Comments about Crumpled Piece Of Paper by Indranil Bhaduri

  • Gold Star - 5,240 Points Patricia Grantham (11/25/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem
    is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel
    like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted
    write. Lovely. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,240 Points Patricia Grantham (11/25/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem
    is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel
    like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted
    write. Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,240 Points Patricia Grantham (11/25/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem
    is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel
    like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted
    write. Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,240 Points Patricia Grantham (11/25/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem
    is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel
    like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted
    write. Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,655 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (8/13/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    wow, a movie in the making
    have you not thought of script writing my friend
    you are very good a poet
    you have a potential in writing too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Rituparna Sen (6/22/2013 4:56:00 AM)

    This is just lovely..a pain, a sense of sorrow and romance, blended together. Fantastic penning. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Neethu Prasanna (3/16/2013 4:51:00 PM)

    It is very nicely written. But some of your poems don't have any hope or strength to move on or live. Like the sentence half empty glass which is a pessimistic definition. I encourage you to write poems on topics which give some thing to think about it, to get a motivation. I am telling this because I feel u r an excellent poet and would love to see some of the poems penned in that way. But still this poem is so brilliant considering the state of mind of the person depicted in the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Bob Brown (11/16/2012 10:52:00 PM)

    One of the best pieces I have ever read. Can't express more.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Darkangel Flyfree (11/7/2012 9:09:00 AM)

    Another beautiful and heartwrenching poem! Im really loving your work, how you write just about how I feel! Bravo here! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,528 Points Valsa George (11/6/2012 8:56:00 PM)

    The poem is deeply moving with its pathos and pensive tone! A heart rending write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (10/27/2012 3:51:00 AM)

    wow brilliantly written.......so beaiutiful.again great imagery and expressions so beautiful thoughts.....I can distinctly sense your emotions.........very well composed loved it :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 849 Points Kaila George (9/24/2012 4:38:00 PM)

    Wow all I can say is Wow......made me cry....brilliant write...keep the pen flowing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,957 Points * Sunprincess * (9/22/2012 4:27:00 PM)

    this is a treasure..sad about the suicide..
    love the vision of the angel..excellent write.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Namrata Nath (9/22/2012 9:39:00 AM)

    The poem is really touching...I could see the man dying in front of me. And it is absolutely not simple.(as u messaged me) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Champs Ulysses Cabinatan (9/19/2012 12:20:00 AM)

    emotionally beautiful... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Rumi Roy (9/6/2012 8:39:00 AM)

    This is just awesome. I can feel the pain, the sorrow, the dilemma and the words of love expressed. The ending is just too good. Marvellous work! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 916 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (9/1/2012 4:22:00 AM)

    Thanks for your lovely poem. The sadness grips the heart. I liked the writing. Best wishes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aria Siren (8/18/2012 10:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful. I thoroughly enjoy your work. The way you string words and emotions together pulls at something inside. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 49 Points Anita Sehgal (8/17/2012 12:01:00 AM)

    loneliness and pathos well brought out (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sunil Babu (8/9/2012 11:09:00 AM)

    you are well aware of lost world and hopes.its a real fodder for thought. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013


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