Members Who Read Most Number Of Poems

Live Scores

Click here to see the rest of the list

(Kolkata, India)

What do you think this poem is about?

For Example: love, art, fashion, friendship and etc.

Crumpled Piece Of Paper

I was all alone
With the pale candle light burning by my side.
Disturbed thoughts and isolated mind
Eating up my soul.
The broken heart sobbed in distress,
And gradually, the solitude engulfed me..
I franctically searched for my lost feelings
And my lustful wishes got devastated
For my missing love,
With me lamenting in melancholy.
The half empty glass fell down
Freeing itself out of my trembling hands,
And broke into numerous pieces,
With scattered capsules all over the floor
Till you came in as the beautiful angel
And put your tender lips on mine..
Bringing the sparkles of distant stars all around
With your divine kiss,
Opening the doors of paradise
For my lonely soul to step in..
Thus leaving the crumpled piece of paper
Lying on the table
Penned with my last wishes saying
'Goodbye World'..! !

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

Submitted: Tuesday, August 07, 2012
Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (End of Existence by Indranil Bhaduri )

Enter the verification code :

  • Patricia Grantham (11/25/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem
    is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel
    like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted
    write. Lovely.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Patricia Grantham (11/25/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem
    is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel
    like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted
    write. Lovely.

  • Patricia Grantham (11/25/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem
    is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel
    like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted
    write. Lovely.

  • Patricia Grantham (11/25/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem
    is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel
    like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted
    write. Lovely.

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (8/13/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    wow, a movie in the making
    have you not thought of script writing my friend
    you are very good a poet
    you have a potential in writing too

  • Rituparna Sen (6/22/2013 4:56:00 AM)

    This is just lovely..a pain, a sense of sorrow and romance, blended together. Fantastic penning.

  • Neethu Prasanna (3/16/2013 4:51:00 PM)

    It is very nicely written. But some of your poems don't have any hope or strength to move on or live. Like the sentence half empty glass which is a pessimistic definition. I encourage you to write poems on topics which give some thing to think about it, to get a motivation. I am telling this because I feel u r an excellent poet and would love to see some of the poems penned in that way. But still this poem is so brilliant considering the state of mind of the person depicted in the poem.

  • Bob Brown (11/16/2012 10:52:00 PM)

    One of the best pieces I have ever read. Can't express more....

  • Darkangel Flyfree (11/7/2012 9:09:00 AM)

    Another beautiful and heartwrenching poem! Im really loving your work, how you write just about how I feel! Bravo here! ! !

  • Valsa George (11/6/2012 8:56:00 PM)

    The poem is deeply moving with its pathos and pensive tone! A heart rending write!

Read all 24 comments »
[Hata Bildir]