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A Semi Dream State

As I float around
in a semi dream state
I see a grassy field
with coloured flowers
none of which I know by name

I just see their beauty
and feel a dream like peace
It's a place you feel safe
and want to stay

Even though it's just a dream
it's real to me

Submitted: Monday, April 16, 2012


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  • Gary Kedron (4/16/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Very nice poem... calming to the soul....

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  • Heather Wilson (6/18/2012 5:49:00 PM)

    Just found this one, I think it`s beautiful, flowers always help to bring me peace.

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  • Sossi Khachadourian (4/29/2012 2:55:00 PM)

    Nice poem its so clear that the dreams are always more beautiful than the life's truths they are free.wish you all the best keep the good job up.blessings!

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  • Sharad Juneja (4/20/2012 6:19:00 AM)

    Beautiful...Dave..... gives me a serene feeling

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  • Valerie Dohren (4/18/2012 4:51:00 PM)

    Beautiful Dave, we all need a dream to step into when life gets us down.

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  • Eric Cockrell (4/16/2012 7:21:00 PM)

    the soul seeking peace.... bathing in stillness! good one!

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