Suchitra Bandi

Rookie (Vishakhapatnam)

A Sunrise - Poem by Suchitra Bandi

A chill was emanating all around,
It was just the sunrise in the morn',
I got up and know what I found?
The leaves and grass just new born.

I peered through the window sill,
The sky was blue and golden cake,
the world was in the bed still,
while I was wide awake.

The cuckoo started a lovely ballad,
which was a lovely song,
I listened to it in a fad,
and got lost in, for so long.

The nature was fresh and lively then,
I was tempted to be with it,
but the alarm bought me back to my ken,
to a clumsy world around me knit.

I longed to be with the nature lush,
I pined for hills, valleys n streams,
I whined for those rains which gush,
and the warm sun rays that gleam.


Comments about A Sunrise by Suchitra Bandi

  • Freshman - 659 Points V P Mahur (3/2/2014 10:50:00 AM)

    Dear Suchitra
    the music and feel in the poem is touching
    keep it up
    I invite you to read my poems and make comments
    Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Siddharth Singh (7/19/2009 5:56:00 AM)

    A breathtaking sunrise penned down.
    A sure 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (7/19/2009 4:31:00 AM)

    a relaxing read, suchitra... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, August 10, 2009


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