Hardik Vaidya

Rookie - 314 Points (26 Dec 1969, I won't be dead till you know I am alive. / Mahuva, Gujarat, India.)

A Unique Relationship. - Poem by Hardik Vaidya

A unique relationship.

Son + Father.
Y to Y.
Fathers in series,
To sons down the trees.
We talk less.
We write rare.
We are in touch.
Silences.
A tear there,
A tear here.
Two drops make an ocean.

A poem by Hardik Mahesh Vaidya.


Comments about A Unique Relationship. by Hardik Vaidya

  • Gold Star - 39,334 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/23/2014 11:35:00 PM)

    Very touching poem Hardik. Having two sons of my own, this poem strikes home.
    'We are in touch. Silences. A tear there, a tear here, two drops make an ocean'.
    At times fathers are in touch, but don't communicate heart to heart the way their
    sons wish they would. A sense of sadness filters through this poem Hardik,
    you've touched my heart with the two drops of tears. Appreciate this thoughtful
    poem. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 14, 2013



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