A Way Of Memory Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

A Way Of Memory

Rating: 4.6


Concerning the smile of her
I form my senses in her
Though she is away from me
I sense her with all memories
Never I miss my love
Never the happiness she gave
I pause on every charm
Every moment spent with her
And raise my arms lightly
To capture her in me tightly
No longer than her eyes
I see my life in it
What a presence of her
Makes everything a pride
How to say of her beauty
Goddesses! yes, my goddesses.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacqui Broad 08 November 2011

This is beautiful. The thing of memories it never allows you to forget! Splendid piece...

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grame peele 08 November 2011

i see life in it captures the attention.09

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Sherlyn Davis 10 November 2011

this is really good, i love it!

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Joyce Yifith 11 November 2011

This is a very nice piece!

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Margaret Beil 11 November 2011

Memories can be beautiful depending on your mood.I feel the colour and the way this reflects through your poem makes this an enjoyable piece of art.10

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Bradley Howington 20 December 2017

A lovely piece. Enjoyed this very much.

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Heather Wilkins 22 June 2013

a lovely write about a memory. I see my life in it- what a presence of her.

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Precious Okidika 05 July 2012

i like the ryme on lines 9 and 10

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I really like this one...good write keep it up

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Emi C.x 22 April 2012

I think its pretty good dude

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