A Wine Bottle Poem by Thampi KEE

A Wine Bottle

Rating: 4.5


In Life we need a needle
So it never be a feedle
we may mute it with a fiddle
But it share with a bottle
Fine it with a wine doodle
When ever we feel it with a shuttle
Play like a violin when we feel loyal
Mum you always give me a apple
I love it like a bottle
Still it mum you make it stile

Monday, April 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 11 May 2015

In very short words you expressed the life very aptly. Yes life is always with quirks and twists.

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Valsa George 04 May 2015

This is an enchanting write... sweetly rhyming and witty! Enjoyed reading it Kee!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 24 April 2015

Yes. Funny little thing. Good. Confess, I should, I had to pick the dictionary to decipher your theme.

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Madan M 15 April 2015

a funny poem and witty

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