Dr Hitesh Sheth

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A Zen Monk - Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

Calm Sage
Indifferent
Unconcerned
Waited
PATIENTLY.
And Poor Problem
Tired of
For want of attention
Solved itself
COMPLETELY.

Dr Hitesh C Sheth

11/12/2008
PS: There is a level of consciousness in which solution precedes problem.And problem comes to give delight, which we get while solving some puzzle which's answer is already known


Comments about A Zen Monk by Dr Hitesh Sheth

  • (2/17/2014 11:58:00 PM)


    Liked it immensely. When solutions come before problems I see them in prescience thoughts coming from music.
    It feels like a knowing that can't be disputed. It fascinates intellect's knowledge. It is very uplifting in spirit.
    Seeing answers to puzzles, formulas and equations as they form in poetry is amazing. Fantastic poem. Thank
    you for sharing your zen knowledge. RoseAnn
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  • (6/13/2009 12:21:00 AM)


    and it leaves behind in its tracks a zen like serenity... (Report) Reply

  • (6/11/2009 7:20:00 AM)


    Everything goes away in time. (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2009 8:22:00 PM)


    if there is a problem, there is a solution, it's just a matter of them finding each other at the right place and time (much like lovers?) ... (Report) Reply

  • (3/31/2009 8:20:00 AM)


    What a word of advice for all! Excellent piece and 10 again.
    Mark
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  • (3/24/2009 12:19:00 PM)


    just pay it no attention...beautiful reminder thank you...John (Report) Reply

  • (3/22/2009 3:25:00 AM)


    Excellent write...says it all...thank you...10++ (Report) Reply

  • (3/20/2009 11:44:00 AM)


    Richard Jarboe (stockton United States; Male; 60)
    To: Dr Hitesh Sheth
    Date Time: 3/20/2009 7: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Zen Monk


    Excellent poem. Could not be written better. Take care,
    richard
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  • (2/20/2009 9:43:00 AM)


    The sages stay in the mountains to speak to nature and observe life...and to come up with a solution to some problems...however, they speak of wisdom all things still lies into our hand how we settle our own accounts. We are gifted with freewill and intellect to have the power to take our own path...10+++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (2/10/2009 2:39:00 AM)


    I totally agree with C.P.Sharma..as we grow older and older our experiences account to preach that..even in normal family-life..no wonder the sage remains calm to realise the solution or fruit..nice poem10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/15/2008 6:35:00 AM)


    Let the problem solves its own..great poem..

    Very logical..and I like its message..very captivation.

    Beautiful write!
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (12/14/2008 4:52:00 AM)


    if it is a problem, it has its own set of solution
    comes out in its own way in time and space, .....well said,10++++, thanks
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  • C. P. Sharma (12/12/2008 8:38:00 AM)


    I believe in Gita and you too,
    ' Do thy duty, fruit is not thy concern.'
    If we have the patience, the fruit follows.
    Thank you for the invite.
    BR
    CP
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 26, 2009


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