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Hana K (10/11/2008 5:55:00 PM)
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beautiful poem
i give 9.8
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Aiswarya. T.anish (9/27/2008 3:33:00 AM)
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it is a very good poem. i liked reading it. i like the line 'there are a few who could unwind and walk the garden with sweet smile.' it shows the beauty of a peaceful garden
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Joseph S. Josephides (9/27/2008 3:02:00 AM)
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Short and beautiful poem for the few who can walk in the garden (of life) , enjoy the
beauties and have a peaceful end there.A poem for dreamers.Thanks. I give a 9++
Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded
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Edna Javelosa (9/26/2008 9:02:00 PM)
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moving on takes time..until then they could fade away and then walk again in the garden with sweet smile..life is a cycle..you can begin from bottom then up again and start from there and down again.....i can begin reading from bottom of your poem and up down...awesome write.
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Cheung Shun Sang (9/18/2008 2:54:00 AM)
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Dreaming like a windmill and glasses. i pick this from one flok song. Hope that you enjoy it. Good poem you have
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