Age Questions Poem by Eric Cockrell

Age Questions

Rating: 4.0


age questions...
the validity of both journey,
and sacrifice...
but the shadow i've cast
wouldnt even fill a thimble!
my ego rears up in outrage,
swearing at least the thimble
would bear my name....
while my soul walks off laughing in disgust,
at the absurdity of identity!

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Ann Beard 07 July 2012

Excellent imagery. From one ego to another love the soul walking off in disgust. 10 for originality (although not sure the vote button is actually working)

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 05 July 2012

while my soul walks off laughing in disgust, at the absurdity of identity! Actually it is quite encouraging, but even in heaven it is said that we will be identified, so are you very sure that the souls would laugh in disgust? I enjoyed reading this cute poem.

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Kaila George 05 July 2012

Thought provoking...makes you think about alot of things, nice write.

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