Alone! Poem by SALINI NAIR

Alone!

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All alone in a lovely spot
Withdrawn to a senseless valley
A frozen dream augments inside
Shivering thoughts marches outside

This voyage is among glowing clouds
Drive that tempts to be eternal
Float to merges in that stampede
Not to the mortal part of self

Love preaches its eternal warmth
Unites the self to a crazy loop
Adore with blindness and mourn in thirst
Ever form of love in shadows

Love all with a sniff of hope
Never adore as its charming flock
Eternity is not its tract
Loss and lapse is in each walk

Love holds all to a lovely shore
Love create all mourn on shore
Love the immortal part of life
To be in eternal love and peace!

©2015 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Monday, January 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajesh Thankappan 12 January 2015

Love may have an immortal role in our existence but can it transcend death? I do hope so. Enjoyed each and every line of the poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 January 2015

Beautiful poem Salini. Fantastic lines I loved the most... Love holds all to a lovely shore Love create all mourn on shore Love the immortal part of life..............................love our soul To be in eternal love and peace!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 13 January 2015

Very nicely crafted with wonderful lines......and rightly said love is immortal and transcends everything......amazing write

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2015

To a lovely shore. A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Let love rule the world. E.K.L.

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Kee Thampi 16 January 2015

Love preaches its eternal warmth Unites the self to a crazy loop Adore with blindness and mourn in thirst Ever form of love in shado........ lovely write

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 January 2015

Love the immortal part of life To be in eternal love and peace! - -Indeed love is immortal. Very nicely penned. Many thanks.

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Valsa George 13 January 2015

'Love leads all to a lovely shore'! When mind gets filled with love, all despairing and menacing thoughts go outside! It is to such a state of mind, man must strive to reach! A beautiful poem Salini!

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Akhtar Jawad 13 January 2015

This voyage is among glowing clouds Drive that tempts to be eternal Float to merges in that stampede Not to the mortal part of self A beautiful poem.

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