Once man was gifted with great time and mind
To feel for fellowman’s joys, miseries with no foul
Those were the glorious moments only to find
Life in full, spirits in zeal and relationships in soul
Full of glories, victories and flair for Hanuman tales
This Digital age man found busy every moment
Slave of comforts, hurried life, passes heartless comment
Dressed Half, fed half and giving others half a smile
Sour at heart but sweet tongued talk spreads a mile
No great deals, witnessing an age of Amoeba messages!
True; abosolutely true. Man has no time, nowadays, for good thing in life. Plastic smiles in miles and hypocrism has vanished the goodness and what all remains a pales shadow of his former self. Narayanan.
Is there anyone not to agree that man tries too hard to catch up with the speed we've got? Meanwhile loosing the essence of life? As time goes fast we have no chance to make memories and then after we've gone, the dear ones can only praise our bones.. Yes we need big changes, we need to stop, take time to look around and ask ourself: what's more important? Keeping up with speedy times or try let out the treasure of the heart? Love, with great love that's how we shall treat everything even the time! If time is loved may slow down and keep around, that is my hope.. 10.Thank you for share, good written poem, my dear friend!
Great poem Rekha! I wish we could all put the brakes on the speed with which we do everything and learn from the lessons of our ancestors.
I so agree with you on this poem. We are truly always in a rush it seems. This is a beautifully written poem Rekha! I'm definitely giving it a 10! Thanks for sharing such fine work! Keep it coming.
Amusingly fascinating... Well observed my friend, people give amoebic gifts... Hanuman tales, is it the Hindu God?
Your thoughts are excellent. The imageries keeps the reader agape. Keep writing
witnessing amoeba in terms of time....interestingly knitted.
Time and tide waits for none.Man rush to keep in track with time.This poem highlights the deteriorating moral values in the modern world during the mans rush. Good work.Keep writing.
very well written Rekha :) yes..the man of the stone age lived and enjoyed actually more than us! But I cudnt get..wat ameoba messages is... explain plz..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a very nice poem. I think it has a very clear message that contains lots of wisdom. Somehow, I can feel the power and postive motion of a certain kindness movement. I think that the world is slowly getting better. Poems like this can certainly contribute to the kindness revolution