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Place called fairy land
Lights and castels highly stand
Land of Million Lights
Laughters reach mountain heights
where Lonely hearts starts to enjoy
the Air of happines and joy
Land where you can hide in
when life forces you to Give in
Screams coming from a rollercoster
and stress finally get its moistur
Fairy wheels hug the skies
and souls free their Longing sigh
Bupming cars run into each other
about it Drivers wont Bother
Its where you can scream you heart out
and you wont worry about falling apart
Even it its called Insane
It's Much better than a Life so Plain
Coz Sometimes you find your serenity
in a place filled with insanity
Sarah Ibrahim ©
Sarah Ibrahim
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Wednesday, January 23, 2008 |
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Wednesday, July 15, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (Amusment Park
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Sarah Ibrahim
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs) (11/20/2008 9:26:00 AM)
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Yes I can't agree more. Amusement parks are real fun where you can scream your heart out. A beautiful subject closer to my heart.
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Liu-ai Thu Sheba (10/15/2008 3:49:00 PM)
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one state of mind is not enough, one world is not enough, another one of your pearls.
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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs) (4/13/2008 10:34:00 AM)
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Sarah...This is one fantastic poem. And yes, I have enjoyed the ride too!
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Tiffanie Lau (1/23/2008 3:28:00 AM)
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Hi this poem is extremely enjoyable. while it is easy to digest it's still really well written. esp since most lines contrast each other, the juxtaposition is so clear:
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Coz Sometimes you find your serenity
in a place filled with insanity
keep penning!
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