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Risha Ahmed (11 yrs)
(11/20/2008 9:26:00 AM) |
Yes I can't agree more. Amusement parks are real fun where you can scream your heart out. A beautiful subject closer to my heart.
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Liu-ai Thu Sheba
(10/15/2008 3:49:00 PM) |
one state of mind is not enough, one world is not enough, another one of your pearls.
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Risha Ahmed (11 yrs)
(4/13/2008 10:34:00 AM) |
Sarah...This is one fantastic poem. And yes, I have enjoyed the ride too!
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Tiffanie Lau
(1/23/2008 3:28:00 AM) |
Hi this poem is extremely enjoyable. while it is easy to digest it's still really well written. esp since most lines contrast each other, the juxtaposition is so clear:
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Coz Sometimes you find your serenity
in a place filled with insanity
keep penning!
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