Sarah Ibrahim

Rookie - 10 Points (18/11/1984 / Riyadh)

Amusment Park - Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

Place called fairy land
Lights and castels highly stand

Land of Million Lights
Laughters reach mountain heights

where Lonely hearts starts to enjoy
the Air of happines and joy

Land where you can hide in
when life forces you to Give in

Screams coming from a rollercoster
and stress finally get its moistur

Fairy wheels hug the skies
and souls free their Longing sigh

Bupming cars run into each other
about it Drivers wont Bother

Its where you can scream you heart out
and you wont worry about falling apart

Even it its called Insane
It's Much better than a Life so Plain

Coz Sometimes you find your serenity
in a place filled with insanity

Sarah Ibrahim ©


Comments about Amusment Park by Sarah Ibrahim

  • Rookie - 0 Points Risha : Ahmed (11/20/2008 9:26:00 AM)

    Yes I can't agree more. Amusement parks are real fun where you can scream your heart out. A beautiful subject closer to my heart. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 29 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (11/11/2008 1:13:00 PM)

    A beautiful and highly meaningful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Liu-ai Thu Sheba (10/15/2008 3:49:00 PM)

    one state of mind is not enough, one world is not enough, another one of your pearls. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 876 Points Sadiqullah Khan (6/5/2008 8:53:00 AM)

    the last lines are so good, , , , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Risha : Ahmed (4/13/2008 10:34:00 AM)

    Sarah...This is one fantastic poem. And yes, I have enjoyed the ride too! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tiffanie Lau (1/23/2008 3:28:00 AM)

    Hi this poem is extremely enjoyable. while it is easy to digest it's still really well written. esp since most lines contrast each other, the juxtaposition is so clear:

    eg
    Coz Sometimes you find your serenity
    in a place filled with insanity

    keep penning! (Report) Reply

Read all 6 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 23, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 15, 2009


[Hata Bildir]