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We lose ourselves to the sky
We grow wings and we start to Fly
But once we lose the Track of ourselves
We Step Down, take off our wings and put them on shelves
We Run to the nearest Highway
Rainy, Sunny, Windy or Foggy. We stay
In hope to understand what we've missed
To know that in Each Darken Corner. Life..Somehow is blessed
To Realize that After a Rainy day
Sun will Breaks the Dark clouds with a single Ray
Sarah Ibrahim ©
Sarah Ibrahim
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Tuesday, September 23, 2008 |
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Wednesday, July 15, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (Breaking Clouds
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Akram Awadat (6/23/2009 1:13:00 PM)
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nice poem, deep meaning
i like it
10+
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Afzal Shauq (5/28/2009 7:42:00 PM)
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much romantic one... liked it too.. and hope my poetry will also touch your heart... best of luck 10+++
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Yoonoos Peerbocus (3/5/2009 8:11:00 PM)
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a meaningful monologue penned with zeal all through...vivid message
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Randy Hogan (3/2/2009 2:10:00 PM)
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For i can not fly for my wings are broken.
before my lifeless body hit the ground,
my sweet angel shall burst the eastern sky...
the amber rays gentle spray
through the clouds
and paint the landscape with Peace and Love....
once more denied but not forsaken
Wow! ! ! this poem is soul moving...10+++++++++++
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/9/2009 7:30:00 AM)
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The poem is ingrained with simple but sound words spreading an inspirational message of hope which always stay alive.
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Sarwar Chowdhury (12/10/2008 1:13:00 PM)
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This is a powerful reflection i can say!
Fine wording! nice rhyme/rhythm
10+
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April Breeland (11/22/2008 2:18:00 PM)
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Breath taking Beautiful.....Great Poem
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Dr.Wardha Jawdat (10/7/2008 11:58:00 AM)
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very very nice..hope suffused poem..makes one feel light and hopefgul..love how you go from the point of angelic form to losing onesself and then rediscovery through hope.
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Yasser Koor (10/4/2008 5:08:00 PM)
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what a wonderful words
It is nice and lovely poem
I like it especially
Sky, , , fly, , , ourselves, , , shelves, , , highway, stay
And ……
it is perfect
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Ency Bearis (10/1/2008 2:24:00 PM)
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a lovely thoughts..well written/rhymes..jamila sadika...
Ency Bearis
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