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Akram Awadat
(6/23/2009 1:13:00 PM) |
nice poem, deep meaning
i like it
10+
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Afzal Shauq
(5/28/2009 7:42:00 PM) |
much romantic one... liked it too.. and hope my poetry will also touch your heart... best of luck 10+++
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Yoonoos Peerbocus
(3/5/2009 8:11:00 PM) |
a meaningful monologue penned with zeal all through...vivid message
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Randy Hogan
(3/2/2009 2:10:00 PM) |
For i can not fly for my wings are broken.
before my lifeless body hit the ground,
my sweet angel shall burst the eastern sky...
the amber rays gentle spray
through the clouds
and paint the landscape with Peace and Love....
once more denied but not forsaken
Wow! ! ! this poem is soul moving...10+++++++++++
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
(1/9/2009 7:30:00 AM) |
The poem is ingrained with simple but sound words spreading an inspirational message of hope which always stay alive.
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Sarwar Chowdhury
(12/10/2008 1:13:00 PM) |
This is a powerful reflection i can say!
Fine wording! nice rhyme/rhythm
10+
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April Breeland
(11/22/2008 2:18:00 PM) |
Breath taking Beautiful.....Great Poem
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Mehreen Tahir
(10/28/2008 6:43:00 AM) |
well-versed...you managed to fly in the sky, lose the wings, give up hope and be optimistic again in just a few lines.very nice expression....
regards, mehreen
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Wardha Jawdat
(10/7/2008 11:58:00 AM) |
very very nice..hope suffused poem..makes one feel light and hopefgul..love how you go from the point of angelic form to losing onesself and then rediscovery through hope.
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