Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 79,672 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

An Innocent Love Affair - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I watched a movie of Suraiya when I was a child,
Suraiya was an Indian popular star,
She exposed her tunes like a guitar,
An appealing beauty making every one wild.

One of my uncles friendly asked me,
Asked a child only ten years old,
But very talkative, and too much bold,
Did you like Suraiya, how is she?

The naughty child knew what he wants to listen,
And he replied a dirty bitch,
Exposes her breasts like a witch,
I was famous for replies, although only ten.

You stupid Suraiyawala how dare you say,
Suraiyawala means one, who belongs to her,
From that day it became my name, spread from one to another,
Gained popularity, more and more, every day.

The name of Suraiya stuck to my mind,
I got her in the college as a mate,
In my sub conscious Suraiya was my fate,
I fell in love with her like a blind.

The fatty girl found many times alone,
I tried to tell her but always failed,
I then decided, she should be mailed,
Why to fear, she was flash and bone.

I wrote a letter on a pinkish paper,
Showing two bleeding hearts stitched with an arrow,
Telling my story of pain and sorrow,
Romantic promises from a loving trapper.

But the problem again how could I deliver,
My sincere sentiments my poetic expressions,
Having charms of teen age and warming emotions,
Perfumed it was my maiden love letter.

I then decided to put it in her journal,
Checked and placed with others on a table,
But the innocent boy inexperienced and feeble,
His shyness internal! His fears external!

Remained in the pocket, the lovely rhymes,
Then came the washer-man and my elder sister,
Who used to have a look, the clothes to deliver,
Found it, censured me for one of my innocent crimes.

Topic(s) of this poem: innocence

Comments about An Innocent Love Affair by Akhtar Jawad

  • (9/21/2016 1:52:00 AM)


    That was a wonderful poem. I loved it. I had believed that incidents of these kind occur only in my life. Now, understand that such affairs happen in everybody's life.

    And Suraiyya is one of my favourite actors of all time. And very lovable singer too. The immortal voice of hers!

    Thank you so much for rekindling the memories.
    A 10 for your lovely poem.

    Your Urdu poems are fantastic; I would take time read them once again.

    Thank you again.
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  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (9/8/2016 11:21:00 AM)

    Beautiful dear Suraiyawala! If Kelly's endorsement of your love poetry is any testimony, you are still a naughty Suraiyawala! Well done. Old memories are precious. They make our precious songs. (10) (Report) Reply

  • (10/4/2015 2:08:00 AM)

    An innocent poem.............................. (Report) Reply

  • (3/17/2015 1:56:00 AM)

    'But the innocent boy inexperienced and feeble,
    His shyness internal! His fears external!

    Remained in the pocket, the lovely rhymes'

    Perfectly captured a universal experience. And brought back the memory of my time upon that rack... Exactly what a poem should do.... Thank you.
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  • (1/22/2015 10:41:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, a picture of an innocent teen aged love....................10 (Report) Reply

  • Charity Nduhiu (9/16/2014 3:12:00 AM)

    Very sweet poem. Keep up (Report) Reply

  • (7/16/2014 4:41:00 AM)

    a sweet love story...
    a common thing with teenagers....
    : D
    i realky like this poem! !
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  • Ramesh Rai (6/14/2014 11:29:00 PM)

    Love of Suraiya and Devanand is very famous. May be there so many would be loving her. Now one more name is annexed on pen and paper. Similarly i was fan of Rekha.For few yrs i was sending beautiful card on her birth day. But she never replied/ After my marriege when i came with my wife, my niece commented Aunty is like Rekha. then after so manny commented. Either she is like or not but her temperament is alike. thatso she is named Hitler. but she is more caring n helpful to all. even at mid night she can accompany for her neighbour for hospital. but love is innocent in all ages. but i m fearless bcoz she has taken words from me not to allow any one. i hv to comply. (Report) Reply

  • Kazi Maisha (5/29/2014 8:36:00 PM)

    In my opinion, this was a such a cute poem mostly due to its ending, but what also catches my attention is your ability to capture, not the complexity, but simplicity of love, specifically teenage love. In some love stories or poems, they'd make the love more dramatic by adding a third wheel and such, which sometimes gets annoying especially to fangirls like me: P. Hence, I love how this love story was simple. There was no complete hindrance to this story. Let's hope the punishment doesn't become an annoying complete hindrance though. :) (Report) Reply

  • Matthias Pantaleon (5/15/2014 12:33:00 AM)

    You tell your story with great creativity. Truly an unspoilt and innocent love (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2014 2:44:00 AM)

    It happens with all teenagers. Lovely Poem. (Report) Reply

  • Ruma Chaudhuri (5/10/2014 1:46:00 AM)

    Nice poem as well as nice story. It has a soft essence that attracts me to read again.So I rated it 10.
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  • Ruma Chaudhuri (5/10/2014 1:23:00 AM)

    Ha ha ha ha
    Nice poem as well as nice story.
    I read it well. It has a soft essence that attracts me to read again.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 10, 2014

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