I'd write a long ode
to delishis hot coffee
and admitt, I'm even willing
but I've no yurning
fer a burning
and have trubble with my spilling.
A 'delishis' write Charles, a bit like as if it had come from a child, trying so hard to achieve a poem. I love the'spillings'. Love Ernestine XXX
Funny and true, well done. Maybe the phantom PH 'p' can helpp you if you dropp anything. Hugs Anna xxx
I kind of like hot coffee, but I prefer it white, white and hot and frothy with choccy bits to bite. I kind of like your poem in fact it's very good I'll come and read another you've got me in the mood. Ruthy: -)
Hey, Chuck! I'm not sure that 'spilling' is mispilled or not. LOL Very cute piece. At the moment, I have a cup of coffee and have recently exited my online dictionary. I don't think I could do without either one. Have a wonderful evening! Beth
It must be the environment; try writing at Decafe where the writng ca-fiend awaits to granu-latte your unspiration, drip, by drip until you perk up and write.
Came to read this poem expecting a senti ode..but that was so kool & funny. Preets
Chuck, I had a hoot at this one! Way to go...I fill so much batter about my spilling misteaks now! ! See Scarlett...a kindred spirit! ! Really cute poem Chuck. I might not know much, (comma) but I know I likes what I sees! ! Hugs, Dee
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I know just how you feel Charles, this is great fun and thankyou so much for sharing it with the reader, Love Duncan