M.D Dinesh Nair

Veteran Poet - 1,733 Points (Thrissur/Vijayawada)

As Your Smile Blooms Out - Poem by M.D Dinesh Nair

As your smile blooms out
It spans over this season too
With all its fragrance.

I bury my past of pathos raving
In the depth of your eyes curious
And I begin to introcept.

As your smile blooms out
It changes my track of race
And its breeze leading all the way.

Perhaps I am to win the race
As the rivals have a season of dismay
And your petals fall not!

In the midst of your giggles
I hear a rain cloud hitting another
In its thunder the music of your glory is echoed.

And down to plains of lesser mortals
The thunder proclaims your name
And I write it on the sky for you

As your smile blooms out
I know, dear this season is mine too
As the race comes to an end.

But in the resurrecting woes of yester seasons
Can your smile ever keep me delighted
And will your lips offer a kiss sweet?


Comments about As Your Smile Blooms Out by M.D Dinesh Nair

  • Gold Star - 4,937 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (12/9/2013 9:53:00 AM)

    what a compromise with the lady of success! ! well done..Dinesh.. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (12/2/2013 11:02:00 PM)

    .. wonderful romantic poem.... the phrases used were great... read it 3 times to absorb everything (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (12/1/2013 6:21:00 AM)

    and down to plains to lesser mortals the thunder proclaims your name and I write it on the sky for you beautifully written I love this phrase (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (11/21/2013 2:22:00 AM)

    A beautiful romantic poem. Very well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (11/15/2013 7:57:00 PM)

    A poem filled with joy and love - perfect. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,071 Points Lyn Paul (11/15/2013 8:43:00 AM)

    This will certainly put a smile on any romantic. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,927 Points Valsa George (11/15/2013 1:10:00 AM)

    Unlike most of your other poems brooding over the disparities and wickedness of the world and the injustices of God and man, this poem is clearly romantic and has greater lyrical beauty and lovey dovey charm! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 14, 2013


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