Vijay Sai (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Nicely structure short style of poetry. Though I think the pacing to the end could be sharper. However a good piece of work overall.

i really really like this :) one thing i don't like is the exclamation point at the end..idk i just feel like it takes something away from the rest of the poem. taht's just my suggestion though. again, really really good poem <3 hope to see more.

Its good, Keep writing and let our fate recreate ;)

neatly done. :) 10= for you, my friend.

A sense of postponement of the inevitable pervades the poem. Like it. -Baru Gobira

simple tink simple god: thumb: : +80hmmm god luck.

Solid, straightforward poem.

Nice, simple, and to the point. Nicely worded too. I liked it. Thanks for the read.