Thoughts swooning under
Autumn chill of afternoon
Flowers loosing bloom
Chirping birds return to nest
Dusk falls silent in night's lap
Lyrical cicadas create music
Crescent moon and I at leisure
Silent listener to the lullaby
Being sung for drowsy leaves
Of black oak
Calm kisses the autumn night
wrapped in sequin of tiny bluets
Earth's robe is still hazy green
Her red and orange dress being tailored
For fall's show by skilled craftsmen of time.
fall's show by skilled craftsmen of time The show starts delighting the eye and the heart. Beautiful autumn. Thank you.
A beautiful description of changes that come with autumn.........................
Calm kisses the autumn night wrapped in sequin of tiny bluets Earth's robe is still hazy green A beautiful poem describing the autumn season and its effects on human mind and soul.I enjoyed reading it. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Your last three lines are wonderful! They constitute one of my favorite images EVER of the colors of autumn. It's not the description of leaves as clothes which is new. It's more complex than that. It's the image of nature as a tailor changing the color of the dress to vivid yellow and red to replace the common-place green - the time of his work equals the time of nature's changes, his artistry is nature's artistry, his mysterious mastery is the mystery of autumn. This is a wonderful evocation of what is MY favorite season, and you give this description without spoiling the beauty with even the slightest hint of winter.
Beautiful poem with quiet Interesting lines........ Earth's robe is still hazy green Her red and orange dress being tailored For fall's show by skilled craftsmen of time. Beautiful preparation of nature to welcome Autumn. Loved your writing.
Autumn has set in and visible changes are on! You have beautifully described the changes! Enjoyed!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thoughts swooning under autumn, beautifully expressed poem and nice feeling it gives.