Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,229 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Beautiful Pearl Of Thoughts! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

While writing a poem
The Poet may have to take a dip
In the river of emotions.

Sometimes
The poet may have to take
Number of dips
To drink the emotions
Sip by sip
And feel the
Thoughts slowly and slowly
Each tiny drops of thoughts
Turn into words.
And words flows around
You like butterflies.
To make a beautiful poem.

Sometimes the poet may have to
Dive so deep down
The seabed that
Poet may come out with
Beautiful pearls
Of thoughts.
So is the poem too
Like a pearl of words
Where each pearl of words
Is passed thru thread and tied together to
Form a beautiful
Necklace of pearls.
So is the reader too
Enlightened
By reading it and feeling it.
Feeling each pearl is like
Wearing
A necklace of pearls.

Pearls are so precious as words
Unique shell cover the pearl of thoughts
Once penned down a beautiful poem comes out of a shell.
Like a Necklace of beautiful pearls.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.


Comments about Beautiful Pearl Of Thoughts! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 16,759 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/13/2014 12:58:00 PM)

    Yes thoughts are delicate beings and pearls and when polished look more than pearls........Geetha..........
    A great piece with precious thoughts (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (8/5/2013 3:00:00 PM)

    I love the thoughts of a necklace of pearls. pearls are so precious as words. very nice write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/23/2013 3:20:00 PM)

    Hence, a pearl necklace. But for the journey. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,446 Points Somanathan Iyer (7/20/2013 7:03:00 AM)

    A great poem in expressing the efforts of poetic world. words expressed are precious than pearls. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,265 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/20/2013 5:11:00 AM)

    you've gone with such fineness into the making of that necklace of pearls! great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,422 Points Valsa George (7/19/2013 11:36:00 PM)

    The skill with which you have stringed together these pearls of words is amazing! ! A lovely necklace! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 129 Points Indranil Bit (7/19/2013 11:07:00 PM)

    The stream of emotions that flow through your blood when creations took birth, are quiet reflections, a mirage in your vision of honour. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (7/19/2013 10:52:00 PM)

    And so let these pearls be ever collected from the depths of thoughts immaculate and be shared with the members of PH from time to time, Madam. A fine write in these times.... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Dave Walker (7/19/2013 3:15:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem, I like how you have put pearls as words.
    A great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 1, 2014


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