Sandra Feldman

Beloved Presence

Like the air that circles by,
For without it we shall die,
Your beloved presence, here,
Indispensable, my Dear,
When I know that you're not near,
Black, dark Shadows break all Light,
Life becomes a useless sight,
In the sadness of the night.

Without you, there is no me,
Being has just stopped to be,
Oneness is so obsolete,
Two hearts should as one now beat,
Only Love can Life complete.

Submitted: Sunday, August 17, 2014
Edited: Sunday, August 17, 2014

Topic(s): love

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  • Veteran Poet - 2,932 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/25/2014 10:24:00 PM)

    Oneness is so obsolete,
    Two hearts should as one now beat,
    Only Love can Life complete.
    - Sigh! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 655 Points Eugene Levich (8/18/2014 9:12:00 AM)

    Beautiful lines; touching memories. Is it time for a published anthology of Sandracita's 100 best poems? (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,042 Points Bill Cantrell (8/17/2014 8:14:00 PM)

    Dark shadows break all light, a lovely poem of the lasting face of love, once beheld, it ever stays in the heart. Another really good poem. (Report) Reply

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