ramesh rai

Gold Star - 12,735 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Bird's Song - Poem by ramesh rai

Every morning i see
birds are chirping
sitting in a queue

The chirping of birds
breakes the silence of nature
makes me awaken
for being engaged in life

I try to understand
chirping of birds
which is beyond my reach

But melody of chirping birds
reaches my ear, as if
nectar of heaven
being pour down in my ears
erecting fidility of my life.


Comments about Bird's Song by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 27,283 Points Akhtar Jawad (7/7/2014 9:40:00 PM)

    a nice and beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 27,283 Points Akhtar Jawad (7/7/2014 9:40:00 PM)

    a nice and beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,990 Points Amitava Sur (7/3/2014 6:22:00 AM)

    Getting up in the morning hearing chirping of birds sounds very pleasing, but more I liked you expressed that thier melody energizes and adds fidility to life...... very nice (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,231 Points Walterrean Salley (6/30/2013 11:20:00 PM)

    Bird's song is sooo sweet. It adds to the beauty of life. We hear it everyday, and it inspires us in a great way, though we cannot understand it. A beautiful writing here. Thank you Ramesh. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,415 Points Hazel Durham (6/22/2013 8:01:00 AM)

    Your poem is as beautiful as the bird's song with charm and grace so divine! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,021 Points Valsa George (6/22/2013 5:21:00 AM)

    I think most of us are drawn towards birds chirping and singing on tree tops! Their pleasing melody greets us as we wake up to the light of day! Enjoyed! Thanks for your nice comment! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,640 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/20/2013 8:46:00 PM)

    Birds excite me. They are pleasant to watch and melodious to listen. Your poem is beautiful. Kindly read my poems 'Bird's Lament', 'Birds Missing', and 'Building Bird Friendly'. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 732 Points Shahzia Batool (6/20/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    A feast for sight in the first stanza, and hearing in the rest of the poem...i recall wordsworth's The World, where he says
    the world is too much with us, late and soon,
    Getting and spending we lay waste our powers, a sordid boon...the reason of my recalling the lines from this sonnet is that we are so much into the problems that we miss the birds'chirping, the sun rising and setting,
    such scenes and melodies are really missed...it is a gentle poem! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,336 Points Valerie Dohren (6/18/2013 3:49:00 PM)

    I love birds, they are beautiful like your poem Ramesh. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (6/18/2013 9:07:00 AM)

    Ramesh Pai sir,

    It is a nice poem and it is your chirping for us who can reach out to you
    Happy to read your comment after a long time. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/18/2013 5:56:00 AM)

    Beautiful display of birds chirping, well explanation of involvement of personal experience.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (6/17/2013 1:16:00 PM)

    so tender and beautiful poem
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 29, 2013


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