Treasure Island

ramesh rai

(13.12.1955 / howrah)

Bird's song


Every morning i see
birds are chirping
sitting in a queue

The chirping of birds
breakes the silence of nature
makes me awaken
for being engaged in life

I try to understand
chirping of birds
which is beyond my reach

But melody of chirping birds
reaches my ear, as if
nectar of heaven
being pour down in my ears
erecting fidility of my life.

Submitted: Monday, June 17, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 29, 2013

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  • Amitava Sur (7/3/2014 6:22:00 AM)

    Getting up in the morning hearing chirping of birds sounds very pleasing, but more I liked you expressed that thier melody energizes and adds fidility to life...... very nice (Report) Reply

  • Walterrean Salley (6/30/2013 11:20:00 PM)

    Bird's song is sooo sweet. It adds to the beauty of life. We hear it everyday, and it inspires us in a great way, though we cannot understand it. A beautiful writing here. Thank you Ramesh. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (6/22/2013 5:21:00 AM)

    I think most of us are drawn towards birds chirping and singing on tree tops! Their pleasing melody greets us as we wake up to the light of day! Enjoyed! Thanks for your nice comment! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/20/2013 8:46:00 PM)

    Birds excite me. They are pleasant to watch and melodious to listen. Your poem is beautiful. Kindly read my poems 'Bird's Lament', 'Birds Missing', and 'Building Bird Friendly'. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (6/20/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    A feast for sight in the first stanza, and hearing in the rest of the poem...i recall wordsworth's The World, where he says
    the world is too much with us, late and soon,
    Getting and spending we lay waste our powers, a sordid boon...the reason of my recalling the lines from this sonnet is that we are so much into the problems that we miss the birds'chirping, the sun rising and setting,
    such scenes and melodies are really missed...it is a gentle poem! (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (6/18/2013 9:07:00 AM)

    Ramesh Pai sir,

    It is a nice poem and it is your chirping for us who can reach out to you
    Happy to read your comment after a long time. (Report) Reply

  • Farah Ilyas (6/18/2013 5:56:00 AM)

    Beautiful display of birds chirping, well explanation of involvement of personal experience.. (Report) Reply

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