Theany Ouy


Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 1)


Love is a battle
That makes us weak
A battle of the heart
That one cannot defeat
When my mind takes control
My body begins to surrender
Leaving a wound behind
For the heart to remember
Insanity attempts victory
Losing my ways of thoughts
Defeat the undefeated
Were the battles I was taught
Without you, my heart bleeds
Injuries upon my soul
Blood stained memories
Are the ones beyond my control
With toil, tears and sweat
Love as my choice of weapon
But to no avail
Has put my heart in execution

Submitted: Tuesday, March 04, 2008
Edited: Friday, April 18, 2008

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  • Antonio Liao (12/1/2011 12:31:00 AM)

    a Wonder of lines like a dose of medicine that conquer our Hearts....Congratulation my Dear Friend...God bless (Report) Reply

  • Amir Forougi (11/13/2011 2:09:00 AM)

    A great fiery sense of love and its experience whether bitter or sweet....Nice Work (Report) Reply

  • Oluwole Olawale (11/10/2011 12:37:00 PM)

    this is beautiful! i love it. love love love, it always makes our countenance to fall.....good write. (Report) Reply

  • Jinal Oswal (11/7/2011 9:13:00 AM)

    Perfectly chosen words... Its a good read.... You are right... love is a battle, it makes us weak... Love is a blessing it makes us strong.. Situations defer.. Thank you for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • Diana Rose Tolentino (11/4/2011 12:57:00 AM)

    its a battlefield indeed. i love the emotion and the flow of words. this is really a nice piece of literary art. thank you..

    diane (Report) Reply

  • Uche Chidozie (11/3/2011 4:36:00 AM)

    beautiful work dear, love is really a battle that takes patience and persistent to win, because there are alot of obstacles on the way, i like your figures of speech, especially 'my heart bleeds injuries upon my soul' keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Joseph Vincent Orlanda (11/2/2011 7:47:00 AM)

    its a terrible feeling when a person fights for something he believes worth fighting for and gets deserted, betrayed or even failed by the same person whom he/she is fighting for. very sad indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Santosh Sharma (11/2/2011 1:20:00 AM)

    A WONDERFUL DEPICTION OF THE BATTLE FOR LOVE, HEART SAYS SOMETHING MIND REASON SOMETHING BUT ULTIMATLE THE TRUE LOVE WINS ALL THE ODDS. BEAUTIFUL WRTIE. (Report) Reply

  • Theany Ouy (11/1/2011 8:14:00 PM)

    You are very much welcome dear friends. I would like to thank all of my readers for all your wonderful support and comments. Much appreciated from the heart. Thank you...

    Theany (Report) Reply

  • Kamel kamel (10/30/2011 3:57:00 PM)

    I understand that you say love's a battle between one's heart again his/her mind so if that's true the end of your nice poem would be: Love as my choice of weapon
    But to no avail my mind
    Has put my heart under death penalty
    very good work Theany it's a love battle :) (Report) Reply

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