Theany Ouy

Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 1) - Poem by Theany Ouy

Love is a battle
That makes us weak
A battle of the heart
That one cannot defeat
When my mind takes control
My body begins to surrender
Leaving a wound behind
For the heart to remember
Insanity attempts victory
Losing my ways of thoughts
Defeat the undefeated
Were the battles I was taught
Without you, my heart bleeds
Injuries upon my soul
Blood stained memories
Are the ones beyond my control
With toil, tears and sweat
Love as my choice of weapon
But to no avail
Has put my heart in execution

Comments about Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 1) by Theany Ouy

  • Gold Star - 18,460 Points Ramesh Rai (1/25/2012 2:36:00 AM)

    love is expressed in wonderful words. nice poem (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 813 Points Antonio Liao (12/1/2011 12:31:00 AM)

    a Wonder of lines like a dose of medicine that conquer our Hearts....Congratulation my Dear Friend...God bless (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amir Forougi (11/13/2011 2:09:00 AM)

    A great fiery sense of love and its experience whether bitter or sweet....Nice Work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Oluwole Olawale (11/10/2011 12:37:00 PM)

    this is beautiful! i love it. love love love, it always makes our countenance to fall.....good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Benjamin Dotse (11/8/2011 1:20:00 PM)

    this is great poem, its really true and i really enjoy it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,009 Points Clarence Prince (11/7/2011 1:49:00 PM)

    For most people, 'Love is a battle' Indeed this is well done, Theany Ouy! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Jinal Oswal (11/7/2011 9:13:00 AM)

    Perfectly chosen words... Its a good read.... You are right... love is a battle, it makes us weak... Love is a blessing it makes us strong.. Situations defer.. Thank you for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points John Raubenheimer (11/6/2011 11:33:00 AM)

    'Leaving a wound behind/for the heart to remember...' lines I will take with me from this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tasha Scott (11/5/2011 11:49:00 PM)

    i really like this cant wait to read the next chapter! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tasha Scott (11/5/2011 11:49:00 PM)

    i really like this cant wait to read the next chapter! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,915 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (11/5/2011 9:16:00 AM)

    Very descriptive. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie (De Va) (11/5/2011 6:20:00 AM)

    beautiful emote very well....touching thx. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Richard McClellan (11/4/2011 8:49:00 AM)

    Yes, love is a battlefield... Nice free style poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Diana Rose Tolentino (11/4/2011 12:57:00 AM)

    its a battlefield indeed. i love the emotion and the flow of words. this is really a nice piece of literary art. thank you..

    diane (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Uche Chidozie (11/3/2011 4:36:00 AM)

    beautiful work dear, love is really a battle that takes patience and persistent to win, because there are alot of obstacles on the way, i like your figures of speech, especially 'my heart bleeds injuries upon my soul' keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joseph Vincent Orlanda (11/2/2011 7:47:00 AM)

    its a terrible feeling when a person fights for something he believes worth fighting for and gets deserted, betrayed or even failed by the same person whom he/she is fighting for. very sad indeed. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Theany Ouy (11/1/2011 8:14:00 PM)

    You are very much welcome dear friends. I would like to thank all of my readers for all your wonderful support and comments. Much appreciated from the heart. Thank you...

    Theany (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 48 Points Fragments Of Light And Love (11/1/2011 12:35:00 AM)

    wow a write of a deep person....i am so honored to \read this write...thanks for sharing.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kamel kamel (10/30/2011 3:57:00 PM)

    I understand that you say love's a battle between one's heart again his/her mind so if that's true the end of your nice poem would be: Love as my choice of weapon
    But to no avail my mind
    Has put my heart under death penalty
    very good work Theany it's a love battle :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, April 18, 2008

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