Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 7,548 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Boundaries of Life! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar


A boundary has vast meaning.
But it has an intense meaning in ones life
Though Lines invisible
Only it's burnt can be felt
while trespassing it.
These are the powerful lines
Meant physically as well as emotionally.
Yet it carries a simple meaning
Where heart is controlled by mind.
Control on ones desire and emotions.
Its like an oath taken by self
One will stand to it, whatever may come on the way.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Submitted: Tuesday, September 03, 2013
Edited: Saturday, November 01, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 5,455 Points Savita Tyagi (8/22/2014 7:01:00 AM)

    Very nice poem Geetha. We all follow our boundary. Willingly or forced in to it by outward pressure. For some thrill lies into breaking it. For others happiness lies in its security. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,783 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/17/2014 1:05:00 PM)

    We are born free but steadily aligned into boundaries within which we reciprocate our life..........Geetha.........
    so nicely penned (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohabeer Beeharry (9/7/2013 8:22:00 AM)

    Life itself sustains itself between two boundaries.
    One is having been born, we cannot go back. We are in we are in.
    But in between the boundaries are hurdles that we need to challenge and make progress.
    Moral boundaries are guidance.
    Very subtle question.
    But I like the poem.well written, terse and to the point.
    Mohabeer Beeharry (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/4/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    You Caught it well. Because before writing this poem, I searched in internet regarding this..This is really complicated part to comment on it..I couldn't get a proper answer in internet..Thanks for your valuable and proper comments.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (9/4/2013 8:05:00 AM)

    Boubdaries come in four stages or types; soft, spongy, rigid, and flexible.
    Everyone sane has boundaries set to protect the inner self. In addition to personal boundaries
    there are subconscious group or social boundaries, but it is an extremely complicated concept
    that has been part of man's psyche since the stone ages... and to complicated for just a comment
    to a poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,807 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/3/2013 11:37:00 AM)

    Boundaries in life are invisible yet they are clearly there to follow. Nicely put in the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,767 Points Rohit Sapra (9/3/2013 10:16:00 AM)

    These verses are really nice. I liked the way you have expressed yourself in this poem. (Report) Reply

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