Break-Up Poem by MNSRAlyssa Bii

Break-Up

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I lost someone that I held so close to my heart
I can't believe that we broke apart
That person was my everything
But know my heart has a huge sting.

I don't know how it led to this
That person always made me feel bliss
Know that he's gone
I just want to cry until dawn.

Life was so much worth living when he was around
When I was around him I never frowned
He always brought butterflies to my stomach
He made me feel moonstruck.

I don't know why he left me
Did I do something that made him want to flee?
Did I say something that made him upset?
I thought he liked me since the day we first met.

Whatever the reason was I'm sure it was for a good reason, right?
I was such an idiot, I should have never held on to him so tight
I regret letting him into my heart
I should have been smart.

But it's already too late
I should have never gone out with him on my first date
The thought of him always makes me cry
I just want to die.

But a couple of months from now, I'll get over him
After all, he was a little grim
I know that I'll move on with another guy
Then I would be able to enjoy the morning sky.

Break-Up
Wednesday, November 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 18 December 2016

Hi Alyssa, A great poem. Upto now, I was reading only the emotions and poesy in your poems. After reading this one, I just went back to them once again. The rhymes, rhythm, vocabulary, enriched narrative, everything fascinated me. Really good poem. I see a very talented poet here. Congratulations. Finding positive vibes here too- Even after a painful heartbreak, the poet is trying to build life back. Loved reading..10++

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