Determined Poem by MNSRAlyssa Bii

Determined

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I don't care about what they say,
I don't mind if they push me away
All I want to do is explore a new place
I just want to go anywhere without a single trace.

My parents say that I'm acting like a fool
They tell me that I'm as stubborn as a mule
My friends say that I'm a little intense
But is it a crime to have a little suspense.

I always dreamed about many adventures
I don't want to be known as one of the losers
The journey might be challenging
But what the heck, I don't want my life to be boring.

I will show them that I am more than just a teen
Even if it means making a scene.
I don't care about all the haters,
I know that my mistakes will show me the right answers.

I am always up for a challenge
I would even be willing to take a plunge.
My mistakes will only bring me closer to success
I don't want people to think that I'm a damsel in distress.

I will try my best to overcome anything
Even if I might get some hating.
I know that I will have to make some tough decisions
But I know that life can give you some burdens.

I might start out alone in my journey,
I might even get hurt badly.
But what matters the most when doing something by yourself,
Is that you can experience life itself

Thursday, November 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: courage,determination,success
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