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Brishti Mazumdar (6/8/2009 11:18:00 AM)
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City-bus can’t cross the globe
Can’t find your cyber destination!
So true, dear....My journey thru your City Bus was enjoyable...10+...Brishti
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Raj Arumugam (5/26/2009 2:26:00 AM)
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interesting medley of images and events...
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Genesis Bernaldez (5/17/2009 7:19:00 AM)
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The title caught me. I knew it was different and modern. Different in theme, different in thoughts, I could say this is based on an experience while daydreaming. Haha, I'm not sure.; p This is inspiring, I'll write something like this.
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Ben Gieske (12/16/2008 6:43:00 PM)
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You describe a very vivid and powerful scene. It leaves me in a bit of a quandary.
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Raj Nandy (9/29/2008 9:53:00 PM)
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Ashraful bhai, I liked the imagery, and the thought process reaching a climax in
the last two lines! Is it a translation from your Bengali one?
-Raj Nandy
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Gargi Saha (9/24/2008 11:44:00 AM)
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A lovely poem.............10++++
Thanks for your nice comments on my poem Who Am I?
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Tsira Goge (9/13/2008 11:01:00 AM)
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Ashraful, Interesting poems... Also it is perfectly written. The dream 'the noble has put' for the poet. But I would prefer mine the old car... Or on foot...
From me 10...
Tsira
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Not a member No 3 (9/12/2008 12:33:00 PM)
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Conscious of time and possibility you write with deceptive depth.. nice work.
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Bob Blackwell (9/11/2008 1:17:00 PM)
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Loved this one going nowhere slowly, means time to think, time to hope and time to dream. Bob
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