Collision Of Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Collision Of Love.

Rating: 5.0


Much distraction hides locked behind large doors
Leading to unhappy boredom with life,
Yet floating invitingly close, the core
Of contentment lies, framed, not by rife
Pleasure, but glowing with destinys' light.

Beauty comes suddenly, and strides the sky
Nightly, searching the stars for love. Look aright
And we spy oceans of happiness nigh
Our hearts. Such two as us, radiant stars
Which, on course for destiny, collide and
Transform into one sublime union. Afar
We were lone, but together drawn now stand
Timeless, eternally living as one.

When stars colliding, unite, love has begun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tia Maria 03 February 2009

You little celestial being you... that was wonderful! Love the title - well, ultimately great things do tend to begin with a big bang don't they: 0 10/10 Fay

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Herbert Nehrlich1 03 February 2009

Another beautiful poem from a big heart. One small tear detected in it but that may just be me. Yes, LOVE. Was there something else worth mentioning? Hxx

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Kris Smith 03 February 2009

Truely beautiful write here Fay warms one up on a snowy cold morning 10 +++ CHRIS

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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