Colourful Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Colourful Love.

Rating: 5.0


Love dervishly swirls, presenting colour,
Churning, love agitates hues. Curious
Shakings ferment life, and revive other
Passionate shades. Blush, previously dreaded
Arrives unexpectedly, though deemed dead.

Disturbed night-time dreams appear, glossed
With silvery light. Love, intervening,
Injects excitement again. Icy-blue frost
Becomes flushed and gleaming. Tinges of red
Seep, rosily flowing, into cold beds.

Painted afresh, doleful contrary browns,
Which accost minds, become charged. Glittering
Gold smiles unfurl between previous frowns.
Life becomes good. Replacing, instead, it's
Colour, love raises a radiant head.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 09 December 2008

Fay, a poem that I found a joy to read.10/10 Ian

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Kris Smith 09 December 2008

Made my day reading this Fay what a lovely start thankyou 10++++++ Chris

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 December 2008

Really magnificiant........rich imagery, beautiful flowing words..

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Robert Howard 12 December 2008

I love the play of shifting colors to symbolize the caprices of love as experienced. It reads like a kaleidescope of positive emotions. Great job!

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Tia Maria 09 December 2008

Read this magnificently written piece which portrays all the moods of love and give yourself a great big pat on the back - Fantastic Fay 10/10 & a hug back at ya :) 'Love dervishly swirls, presenting colour, Churning, love agitates hues. Curious Shakings ferment life, and revive other Passionate shades. Blush, previously dreaded Arrives unexpectedly, though deemed dead. Disturbed night-time dreams appear, glossed With silvery light. Love, intervening, Injects excitement again. Icy-blue frost Becomes flushed and gleaming. Tinges of red Seep, rosily flowing, into cold beds. Painted afresh, doleful contrary browns, Which accost minds, become charged. Glittering Gold smiles unfurl between previous frowns. Life becomes good. Replacing, instead, it's Colour, love raises a radiant head. '

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Kevin Eaglesfield 09 December 2008

Fabulous.Really enjoyed this vivid and beautiful poem.More then 10 if I could.Kev x

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 09 December 2008

Colour my love, Hues of sweet emotions all pesented has the coulors of love.. Andrew 10

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