Hardik Vaidya

Rookie - 314 Points (26 Dec 1969, I won't be dead till you know I am alive. / Mahuva, Gujarat, India.)

Commitment - Poem by Hardik Vaidya

Your eyes committed.
Your hair, the sun shine on them committed.
The gentle movement of your bosom as you breathed,
Your lips, they didn't move, in utter silence,
In the blush of youth, committed.
Your navel, hiding behind your Saree, a star on your waist,
Committed to a confession.
A confession you never made.
Your tounge was tied.
You therefore never lied.
When will you come to me a sinner,
So that we can sin together?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I don't tell stories, I murmur dreams.

Comments about Commitment by Hardik Vaidya

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (2/8/2013 11:33:00 AM)

    Thank you Dave walker, you made my life. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,045 Points Dave Walker (2/7/2013 6:34:00 AM)

    A great poem, like it, a great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 7, 2013

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