Cries Of A Model Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Cries Of A Model

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I am thankful to you,
my dear artist,
for making me a model of your new painting,
you spent a lot of money,
for purchasing colors to paint me,
for purchasing artificial blue jewels to make my eyes,
for purchasing soft colorful cotton to make my body,
no doubt in it,
my three dimensional portrait is a work of art.
Have a look at me,
artificial jewels do not cry,
there is no heart inside soft cottons,
your painting lacks warmth and heart beats,
your painting isn't a slave of instincts,
but I live and I love,
and I may die with two or three kittens in my womb,
I acknowledge your love for me.
But,
just love isn't enough for me,
you have been kind to me,
and whenever I cried at your doors,
you gave some food to me,
today,
when your painting has been sold out,
and,
you got a handsome return of your work,
you brought biscuits, candies, chocolate,
and toys for your children,
and you forgot your model!
I am still crying and waiving my tail at your gates,
I love your children but at the moment,
I can't play with them,
my dear artist,
I am hungry since last night,
you know I am carrying,
and I need more food nowadays!

Cries Of A Model
Thursday, February 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 20 May 2017

It seems he is more attached to the image he envisions than to the flesh and blood woman beside him. Idealizing her doesn't do any good in real life.

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Rose Kanana 05 February 2017

I like the flow of the entire poem, emotions brought out...good words justice done here

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 February 2017

A nice and thoughtful poem...............................................

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Rajnish Manga 03 February 2017

Fine portrayal of feelings from the model's (more so when it a cat) point of view. It may equally be applicable to men and women who serve as a model. Thanks.

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