DEEP DARK SOUL POET

Rookie - 170 Points (09/1965 / Australia)

Dark Rain... - Poem by DEEP DARK SOUL POET

The rain started falling today, from up high
within the dark clouds embracing the sky
they swelled like honey dew,
ripe and sweet, something new.

the sunset played the saddest tune,
of past love and passion in ruin
each ray lingers to touch the moon
reflecting memories in a mirrored cocoon.

the silence haunts me in my dreams
chaotic, with endless questioning it seems
with silver linings making icy steam
encasing the raging fire within.

questions left behind in every heart's mind
softly haunting for answers to find
each lonely answered prayer I embrace
deep within my darkened space.


Comments about Dark Rain... by DEEP DARK SOUL POET

  • Gold Star - 13,216 Points Amitava Sur (6/24/2014 8:49:00 PM)

    A nice write up with proper rhythm... liked the poem (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (5/5/2014 10:44:00 AM)

    I'm loving the way you write! Adding you to my list of poet favorites! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,969 Points Bill Cantrell (5/5/2014 6:48:00 AM)

    Good poem my friend, I like the wording as well as the rhyme, If you wish, read my poem ]]Dead Rain (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 5, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, May 5, 2014


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