Shahzia Batool

Bronze Star - 2,192 Points (Pakistan)

Dawn! - Poem by Shahzia Batool

Memories dawn on me
at the nightfall, have you seen
where's gone the darkness?

Comments about Dawn! by Shahzia Batool

  • Saadat Tahir (8/5/2013 2:49:00 AM)

    Ah....the after glow of lost loved ones
    beautifully depicted....
    a bit ironic and dark in its effect....nicely penned well conceived with great compression

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  • Yasmeen Khan (8/3/2013 5:21:00 AM)

    The darkness is lightened by memories' glow, I enjoyed this write brief but beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (8/3/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    The night soon evaporates into a new dawn where all we have left are our memories. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/2/2013 4:27:00 PM)

    dawn is just around the corner. darkness will only last a short while. good write Shahzia (Report) Reply

  • (8/2/2013 3:51:00 PM)

    Interesting dream of yours. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (8/2/2013 9:22:00 AM)

    Very cute and deep.You can do it easily. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/2/2013 8:26:00 AM)

    Dawn of memories drive away the darkness of thoughtless state. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • (8/2/2013 6:24:00 AM)

    there can not be a better poem than this composed in a few words and thought-provoking-a-volume, thanx (Report) Reply

  • Robinson (8/1/2013 8:09:00 PM)

    The darkness envelopes the sweet memories
    and the bitter also
    In the darkness we examine our memoriess
    For there is too much to bear in the brightness of daylight.
    So in our twilight and embracing the darkness
    we dream and comes the cures we seek to continue into all our tomorrows
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  • Ramesh Rai (8/1/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    dawn comes to dispel the darkness. memories are like mirror.beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/1/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    Wow beautiful poem..Short and sweet and loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (8/1/2013 2:58:00 AM)

    sweet memories dispel the darness to a world where there is only happiness... love this poem, too... aw (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 1, 2013

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