Shahzia Batool

Rookie - 561 Points (Pakistan)

Dawn!


Memories dawn on me
at the nightfall, have you seen
where's gone the darkness?

Submitted: Thursday, August 01, 2013
Edited: Thursday, August 01, 2013

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  • Rookie - 888 Points Saadat Tahir (8/5/2013 2:49:00 AM)

    Ah....the after glow of lost loved ones
    beautifully depicted....
    a bit ironic and dark in its effect....nicely penned well conceived with great compression

    liked
    blessings (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 413 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/3/2013 5:21:00 AM)

    The darkness is lightened by memories' glow, I enjoyed this write brief but beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 245 Points David Wood (8/3/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    The night soon evaporates into a new dawn where all we have left are our memories. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poet's Fan (8/2/2013 6:24:00 AM)

    there can not be a better poem than this composed in a few words and thought-provoking-a-volume, thanx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 858 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/1/2013 8:09:00 PM)

    The darkness envelopes the sweet memories
    and the bitter also
    In the darkness we examine our memoriess
    For there is too much to bear in the brightness of daylight.
    So in our twilight and embracing the darkness
    we dream and comes the cures we seek to continue into all our tomorrows (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,046 Points Ramesh Rai (8/1/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    dawn comes to dispel the darkness. memories are like mirror.beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,451 Points Wahab Abdul (8/1/2013 2:58:00 AM)

    sweet memories dispel the darness to a world where there is only happiness... love this poem, too... aw (Report) Reply

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