Shahzia Batool

Freshman - 605 Points (Pakistan)

Distance


My mind
with all the precious
treasures of memories
travels a lot...
but the distance
of its journey
is from
myself to yourself...

Submitted: Tuesday, January 10, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, January 11, 2012

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  • Rookie Passionate Reader (7/2/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    Great compression! ! ! wise, true and insightful! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (6/13/2013 11:40:00 AM)

    short and to the point. I like short poems. I love the thought of this poem. The distance is short between you and me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/12/2013 1:19:00 PM)

    wao brief but amazing poem, to write a brief poem to show some one's worth inspiration ally, wholly & completely is really hard task to do, but when it comes from a brillient poetess like you, there is no need to surprise (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sun Shine (5/8/2013 9:05:00 AM)

    A simple yet complete poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (4/30/2013 3:27:00 AM)

    It's nostalgic, brief and brisk, with a beautifully built paradox. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,688 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/2/2012 12:25:00 AM)

    Brisk but very nice poem! Go to member club/member area then inbox to read yor mails. And tel me if u still cant see them. God bless. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,181 Points Walterrean Salley (10/11/2012 11:19:00 PM)

    Profound Shahzia. And skillfully penned. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shumaila Bari (9/13/2012 12:25:00 PM)

    I feel true 'break-down' of language to describe how simply you summed up an overwhelming phenomenon of our lives. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (6/2/2012 8:34:00 PM)

    Yes! You have touched many peoples minds and emotions
    with your insightful, beautiful, easy to understand, yet deeply moving words. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Shihabudheen K J (5/16/2012 2:38:00 AM)

    great indeed..........so short but so promising lines.........the meaning of distance is so big.......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,841 Points Ramesh Rai (4/26/2012 7:57:00 AM)

    Indeed a long journey but very closer (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (3/23/2012 10:50:00 PM)

    an excellent piece! heat to heart is the distance the journey took along with memories of the journey itself. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Rizvana Parveen (3/20/2012 1:58:00 AM)

    lovely lines........... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 56 Points Jahan Zeb (1/29/2012 9:06:00 AM)

    Wonderful work. I really like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Molay Toufik (1/24/2012 9:58:00 AM)

    O.M.G...... WHAT IS THAT IT'S REALLY SHORT BUT TRULY WONDERFUL IT'S EASY TO READ HARD TO WRITE I LIKE THIS PICE OF ART
    KEEP IT
    SINCERELY (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Vipins Puthooran (1/23/2012 12:43:00 AM)

    This's fantastic! ! ! ! ! ! top marks! ! ! ! ! **************but the distance of its journey will be decided by my heart************* (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gordon Tseng (1/11/2012 2:44:00 AM)

    My mind
    with all the precious
    treasures of imagination
    travels a lot...
    but the distance
    of its journey
    is from
    being to unbeing... (Report) Reply

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