Do Not Say Goodbye Again! Poem by Shahzia Batool

Do Not Say Goodbye Again!

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Don't increase
my suffering, pain;
do not say goodbye again!
'I love to see you all the time, '
this says to you
my eyes' rain.
do not say goodbye again!
my eyes have seen the shocking scene
of going away
of many friends...
but calling them, requesting them
was all in vain.
my only Friend!
you ought to know this fact
that on my heart's realm
but you still reign
'i love to see you all the time'
this says to you my eyes' rain...
do not say goodbye again...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 13 April 2012

real good by is very difficult to say or to hear from the dear and near ones....your poems are of love and affections which have eternal values......

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Jasbir Chatterjee 22 May 2012

Nice poem, Shahzia...saying goodbye or not saying Goodbye is immaterial...we always have our memories to fall back on and our work to keep us occupied...

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Passionate Reader 02 July 2013

It's hard to say Goodbye and when it comes to family and friends then it becomes painful. Pictures can never replace the being there just like words can never replace true feelings! ! ! So YES 'i love to see you all the time' this says to you my eyes' rain... do not say goodbye again... Great write! ! !

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Heather Wilkins 13 June 2013

good-bye is a painful word to hear. One should really understand what he is saying when he says good-bye. nice write

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Yasmin Khan 23 April 2013

It is so painful to say goodbye. This piece is steeped in love and compassion, a cry from the hearts that we don't want our dear ones to leave us. It's an emotional write.

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Shumaila Bari 22 June 2012

nice one. what if you write in free verse. i feel free verse more flexible to expression.

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Captain Cur 24 May 2012

Very touching poem about the difficulty of separation. Not knowing when we will see out friends or loved ones.

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