Domestic Exorcism With A Baseball Bat...(Humor) * Poem by elysabeth faslund

Domestic Exorcism With A Baseball Bat...(Humor) *

Rating: 5.0


Was the same dull nite
All over agin.
Comforter cozy.
Ice cream gone.

'Will ya shut up! !
Ya wrekin ma movie!
Quit floppin aroun, and
Get the flies out ya mouth!

Talk English, ya bum!
This 'BOOGALA BOOGALA'
Ain't gonna get it.
And get off the ceilin...'

Then knocking on the door.
'Who the hell is it? '
'A priest, my child...
With Holy Oil...'

'I never called ya, and
Don't need that.
Save your rites.
I gotta baseball bat.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 09 August 2007

Extreme unction with a Louisville Slugger.

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Ray Lucero 10 June 2007

elysabeth, Wickedly Wiccan and funny! Peace, Ray

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Trade Martin 10 June 2007

'Boogala, boogala'...., very cute Elysabeth, I really enjoyed it....! ! ! Best, T.M..

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Ted Sheridan 10 June 2007

I hate when a priest shows up at your door late at night. LOL

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Alison Cassidy 09 June 2007

Love the way you 'become' the characters you show us in your poetry. Something tells me you've tread the boards sometime in your life. Clever, witty penning with a wonderfully abrupt conclusion. love, Allie xxxx

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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