Donate Me A Pinch Of Your Love. (1) Poem by Amitava Sur

Donate Me A Pinch Of Your Love. (1)



This is night, end of all light
The darkness is all around.
I’m alone in my study room -
With pile of books and the old watch.
No one is nearby me -
Excepting that pendulum’s ding dong.

A restlessness with a hollowness rapidly seeps in
My little heart bleeds heavily
I’m pulled down in abyss……….

Late in the night, being lost within mine
Was aimlessly roaming in the street.
Went into a pub took a glass of strong liquor
And drank them in one breath.

Thus I poured - the venom inside me
To kill my pains within.

With my eyes being red
And heart fully burnt -
I cry thunderously for my love.

If you can’t come in my front
Then why are you calling me from all around?

I’m ready to die with a big smile
Just donate me a pinch of your love.
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Amitava (24.03.2014) 2-00 pm

Monday, March 24, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 28 March 2014

Thank you Valsa for your lovely comment, I also do not agree that the strong liquor is any remedy. That's why I wrote....... Thus I poured - the venom inside me To kill my pains within.... It is to kill the pain forcibly, but not reducing, nor any remedy.

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Valsa George 27 March 2014

A very emotive write.... tugs deep! During day time the world is alive, but when night descends, the loneliness is heightened.... But strong liquor is no remedy to drown the pain! Believe in God, believe in self, trust and love others, things will straighten! Thanks for your comment on my 300th poem!

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Patricia Grantham 25 March 2014

A very deep and emotional write. I feel your pain and sorrow through your words and expressions. The sun will shine again through your dark tunnel. Love also will come again. Take care my friend.

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Roseann Shawiak 24 March 2014

Wow, you have knocked me over with your grief, Amitava. I can feel the tormenting emotion filling you through this poem, my heart bleeds for you. However, you must keep writing of your love and sorrow to find your way through it all. There is a reason for your grieving, go through your thoughts, write them down and let them go into the universe. They will come back to you in silence and hopefully help ease your sense of sorrow. RoseAnn

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